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    JP author Michael Crichton wrote the forward to Philip J. Currie and Kevin Padians "Encyclopedia of Dinosaurs" book. (From: Raptaur)
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    Raged Instinct
    By jp

    Raged Instinct

    Chapter 1: The Thunderstorm

    Boom! I woke up from my deep sleep to see that a thunderstorm rolled in. The sky was dark black and rain was coming down so hard that it went through the tree tops and was sprinkling down on my pack. I saw my mate, Dawn, rubbing against my side. There were some birds chirping in the forest so it must be early in the day. I got up and stretched my arms and legs. The rest of my pack soon woke up as well and stretched. After stretching I quickly clean my feathers of any insect intruders. My pack was ready for early hunt. My pack moved quickly through the bush towards a dinosaur nest for some delicious eggs. There were few sounds in the forest all but the birds and our quiet footsteps. We finally reached a Gallimimus nest full of eggs. We walked in quietly not to wake the parents off these eggs. We were only a few steps away from the nest when a roar was heard. Doesn't sound like the roars from the larger predators but it didn't matter; it woke up the parents.

    They got up and started aggresively screaming at us trying to scare us away. We were ready to hold our own ground against them. I was thinking of going for the throat on one of them. Just as we were about to attack the creature that made that roar came out of the bushes all around us. The humans and their metalic creatures, how I despise them. They ambused us and seperated my pack, they surround Dawn and I. They took out a long cylinder thing and it made a pop noise. I felt a sharp pain in my neck and started to feel real tired. I heard another pop and saw my mate get tired. Soon I fell to the ground and saw the humans walk towards us. I blacked out. I woke up only to find out that I'm not in the forest anymore. I'm in the lair of the humans. I was still dizzy and couldn't see right so I tried to escape by running. I ran into some metal poles. My vision finally returned and I saw that not only Dawn and I are stuck in cages but also other raptors to, though they are from other packs. Raptors from other packs had different colours than my pack, my pack had colours of orange and black stripes. These other raptors we brown, dark red or dark orange. I kept searching the room for any raptor from my pack. I finallt spotted two from my pack, it was Rain and Cloud, they were mates to eachother. I called out to them. They responded with a quiet scream back, they were probably still tired.

    Dawn was worried, I noded to her that we will be okay, even though I didn't even believed that. The entrance to the area opened up and white colour humans came out. They walked up to my cage and looked at Dawn and I with great interest. One of the humans called to the other human and told them something but I couldn't understand them. They started to move my cage on some elevated moving floor and moved Dawn and I towards another room. They opened our cage and released us into the small room with its exit opened, did they let us out back to the forest? Only way to tell was to go through the exit.

    6/29/2004 9:46:16 PM

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