TRIUMVIRATE SE Chapter Twenty-Six By The Host
EXT. CORPORATE TOWER - NIGHT
The great gothic tower stretches thirty thousand feet above the level of the street, inspiring awe and terror in all that see it.
INT. LOBBY - CONTINUOUS
Davies, Macy and Johnson enter the vast lobby of the Corporate headquarters. It is an immense square room, the upper levels of the walls carved with intricate motifs, dominated by a cross. HUNDREDS OF WORKERS in suits pack the room, going about their business.
JOHNSON This place isn’t empty!
Macy sighs.
MACY A lot of people are going to die. DAVIES This couldn’t have been Dawson’s intention. MACY Let’s find a lift, get to the top.
He leads them through the lobby.
INT./EXT. CAB – MOVING - CONTINUOUS
NOW THE CAB PASSES between the buildings beyond the great park. It zooms forward past several towers and hangs a sharp right turn, trying to shake the vehicles following. Suddenly, though, the cab is faced with eight police vehicles hovering directly in front of it.
INSIDE THE CAB, the driver curses.
CABBIE Hold on, guys, we’re gonna make an exit!
The police open fire as the cab approaches head-on. At the last moment, the vehicle swerves and smashes into a low, glass-walled building below the cops.
INT. SHOPPING MALL - CONTINUOUS
A vast shopping complex, packed with holographic advertisements and well-dressed SHOPPERS. The cab smashes through a wall of glass at one end; shoppers scream as they run, trying to get away from the vehicle, which spins across the floor and comes to the rest at the edge of a balcony looking over to the level below. The cabbie and Steve and Willem bound out of the cab just as it teeters over the edge and falls to the level below, landing at the base of a fountain. The three look around at the slack-jawed crowd standing in the luxurious consumer palace. The cabbie smiles, holds up his hands.
CABBIE It’s all right, folks. Everybody got out okay. No need to worry about us. Go on back to your scheduled shopping routine.
No response from the crowd. Suddenly EIGHT UNIFORMED SECURITY GUARDS push through to face Willem and Steve and the cabbie.
FIRST GUARD GET THEM! CABBIE RUN!
But he doesn’t have to tell Willem and Steve. They push their way through the crowd, followed by the armed guards, making their way for a doorway placed beside a store.
INT. GLASS BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Willem and Steve and the cabbie run across a glassed-in footbridge over a busy highway; at the far end the words ‘CORPORATE TOWER’ are inscribed above the door.
CABBIE Follow me, I know my way ‘round here!
Guards are now in the bridge behind them. The glass doors ahead begin to close. Willem and Steve and the cabbie speed up; they make it through the doors just as they close, just as the guards’ first laser blasts are let loose, now harmlessly blasting the door.
INT. CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS
Now they find themselves on an upper-level balcony overlooking the expansive lobby below. They stop to catch their breath.
WILLEM Why are they still chasing us if you left all of your loot back in the cab? Don’t they have more important things to do? STEVE (Indicating he and Willem) I assume they’re chasing us. CABBIE Some hostages you are.
MACY (O.S.) Hey!
Hearing Macy’s voice, Steve and Willem look over the balcony; the Cabbie comes up behind them. Below they see Macy, Davies, and Johnson staring up at them. Macy gives a wave. Willem grins widely at Steve.
CABBIE Who’s that? STEVE Our friends.
Steve waves back and motions that they will come downstairs to meet Macy. Macy gives a thumbs-up and turns to Johnson and Davies; at that instant, as Steve and the others turn away from the balcony, laser blasts ring out behind them. They swing around to see a half-dozen GUARDS emerge from the glass hallway, blasters blazing. There is a chorus of SCREAMS as the PEOPLE in the crowded lobby throw themselves to the ground or try to get out of the lobby. Steve and Willem immediately withdraw lasers from their pack and take up defensive positions behind pillars, firing back. Steve unclips a smaller laser pistol and tosses it to the cabbie, who stares at it a moment before aiming and taking his first cautious pot-shot.
DOWNSTAIRS, pandemonium reigns. Macy and the others withdraw their blasters and turn around in a circle as the crowd surges around them, looking for targets and threats.
MACY Go now. I’ll be right behind you. DAVIES Go-?
A GUARD appears on the balcony, and then another, taking aim and shooting at the three. Macy shoots back.
MACY Run!
Davies turns and pushes through the crowd without looking back.
JOHNSON Take this!
He quickly shoulders off his pack and drops it at Macy’s feet, then turns to catch up with Davies. They try to push their way through, but the crowd is thick and panicked. Davies bodily shoves people to the ground. Suddenly the way is cleared as a laser blast connects with two people directly in front of Davies; they crumple to the ground. Jack stops and stares at the bodies for a moment; Johnson grabs Jack by the arm and hops over them, pulling Davies behind him just as another blast scorches the spot Davies had just stood in.
ON THE BALCONY another GUARD takes careful aim at Jack and Robert and is about to pull the trigger when he is hit with the butt of a laser pistol and falls to the ground. The cabbie spins around, all smiles, as Steve and Willem run up to him breathless.
CABBIE This bastard used to be my supervisor. WILLEM Come on!
Willem and Steve continue past the cabbie as another series of laser blasts rings out, following the fighters as they bound along the balcony. The cabbie turns after them
CABBIE (To himself) I wonder if skinny white boy replacement’s around here somewhere. . .
INT. CORRIDOR – MOMENTS LATER
Jack and Johnson are indeed okay, though perhaps a little breathless. They round a corner in an empty corridor and come to a lift.
JOHNSON Here’s a lift! DAVIES They must be all disabled by now. JOHNSON Yeah, well, not anymore.
Robert withdraws a tiny box-like object from his pocket and presses it up against the lift control panel, set into the wall. There is a small shower of sparks as the box gloms on, and the lift doors open.
DAVIES How’d you do that? JOHNSON (Entering the lift) I was an engineer in another life.
INT. CEO’S OFFICE - NIGHT
The CEO holds a drink in his hand, still full. He watches battle rage over the city outside his window. The sky is beginning to lighten: dawn will soon come, shedding light into his darkened office.
Just as the CEO take the drink to his lips there is a beeping sound and the image of Admiral Copley appears behind him. The CEO turns and places his drink down on his desk.
COPLEY Driven to drink? (Beat) Good, good. The war with Al T’Har is over here. We won. Of course.
THE CEO Congratulations.
COPLEY Yes, yes, thanks. Meanwhile, your battle? I’ve been watching on the holovision, of course, but I wanted to hear it from yourself. THE CEO We’re awaiting your reinforcements. COPLEY Yes, about that. You’re currently out-numbered six to one, and you’re taking more casualties than Dawson. With my reinforcements you’ll only be out-numbered three to one.
There is a long, bitter pause. Then:
COPLEY (CONT’D) It’s all broken, our Triumvirate, our plan. Yours is a sinking ship, and I’m keeping my head above water. Good luck, good riddance, good bye.
Copley disappears. The CEO falls heavily into his seat and downs the alcohol.
INT. LOBBY – MOMENTS LATER
Most of the crowds have dispersed. Steve, Willem, and the cabbie, still in the upper lobby, are backed up against a wall. A door is closed behind them; they slowly back toward it holding off guards with the threat of their weapons, but they are outnumbered and slowly being surrounded. Steve reaches back as he comes to the door to activate it and open it, to no avail.
LEAD GUARD It can only be opened from the other side. Drop your weapons!
At that moment the door opens and Macy steps out. There is a moment of surprise on all sides; Steve, looking back, does a double-take and then scrambles for the door followed by the others. Macy backs inside the door as the guards open fire.
INT. STAIRWELL - CONTINUOUS
But it’s too late; all four are now inside a utilitarian stairwell with the door shut behind them.
STEVE Good timing.
MACY Who’s he? CABBIE Just another pissed-off cabbie named Leo. WILLEM Where’s Jack and Johnson? MACY Going up. Come on, we’ve gotta find a monitor!
They follow him back down the stairs, guns at the ready, as the guards on the other side of the door break through and take positions in the stairwell, some shooting at and some following our heroes and some doing both.
AUTOR'S COMMENTARY: In the original version of Triumvirate, there was an additional twelve- or thirteen-page sequence here where Davies and Johnson were engaged in a shoot-out in the elevator shaft; Macy screwed with the gravity system in the shaft so that characters would fall up it and then down and then float and so on, and then there was a shoot-out between Macy and the guards in which he was saved by Leo and the others. The bit with the lift I really liked; it was basically a more sophisticated version of a scene that appeared elsewhere in Gemini’s Redemption. It was one of my favorite action sequences in this entire screenplay, indeed. But upon reflection it added nothing to character or plot, and served only to prolong the ending. I decided to cut to the chase – or, more rightly, cut the chase out entirely. I added the brief shoot-out in the lobby you just read and otherwise had Davies and Johnson move directly to the CEO’s office for the final showdown.
Oh, it’s off to the climax now! Read on, I dare you.
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