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    Scientists believe the part of the spinosaurus brain devoted to vision was enlarged, suggesting it had excellent sight. (From: sPitter)
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    Raptor 2!(chapters 5-7)
    By Panos

    (WARNING: this fan fic contains violence, language, and sexuality)


    NOTE: This is a sequel to RAPTOR. A smash dino flick from New Horizon. Go and check out the movie today! Until then, read these short chapters...


    Chapter 5


    The military landed and set up a perimeter around Warchester. Nothing would get in and nothing would get out. Not even a dinosaur. General Savage came down in a large helicopter giving out orders. Colonial Yang, a short Asian man, followed, along with hundreds of soldiers. Twelve of those soldiers a lined in order on a large field. Yang came about.

    "Listen up magots! There are ten dangerous targets to take down in this town, and I depend on you ladies to do it so, is that clear?"

    "Yes, sir!" they all said, except one.

    Private Greg said, "Hey, man," in a comedic way.

    "Excuse me Private, what the fuck did you just say?" asked Yang with his strong Asian accent.

    "What's up man?"

    "Are you gay, Private?"

    "I don't know man."

    "I order you to stop acting gay!"

    "Yes sir! I promise to stop acting gay, sir!"

    "And don't look down at me like that!"

    One of the normal soldiers spoke, "Sir?" and Yang walked up to him.

    "Private?" he asked.

    "What do you intend us to do here, in Warchester?"

    "If you see anything out of Jurassic Park, make it extinct..."


    Several soldiers put up mile long portable army electric fences with barbed wire. And had two soldiers patroling every one-hundred feet. Soon they set out tanks to patrol the streets and to wake everyone up and tell them what was happening.

    "Do you see anything out there?" asked one of the soldiers in one of the green armored tanks, driving down the street.

    "Only night--wait! Something is walking around outside on the porch of that house! What the fuck is that?" He pushed the little red button and a missle launched and blew up the porch--along with the house.

    "You dumb fuck! That must of been the owner. He wasn't no dinosaur, he was a human being!"

    "It wasn't my fault, what the hell is a man doing outside at this time at night!"

    "Well, we've got the U.S. Army here shouting out 'there are dinosaurs in this town please wake up and report to the nearest officer' and what the hell do you think they are going to do?"

    "I didn't think of it--there!" He pushed the button again, two--no three houses blew up in an instant. "Gotcha!"

    "You just killed an innocent dog along with everyone in those houses!"

    Due to the explosions the entire block ran outside to see what was happening and the soldier started to press the bottons left and right...


    Colonial Yang, and a fleet of soldiers patroled a portion of the fencing. Men with helmets and large guns marched around. An army jeep pulled up with two teens in the back. The driver got out and Yang approached.

    "Who are these two?"

    "Civilians" said the driver. "The skinny one claims he's a Russian Communist while we found the fat one chasing after a dinosaur. We killed the dinosaur and then he attempted to hurt us. Anyway, sir, I thought they might be of some help."

    "I see, Private. You are dismissed. " said Yang. "Now, you two, who are you two really?" he asked to the teens.

    "I'm a Russian Communist named Justin and this is Big Mike" one spoke. "You hear his name in your dreams, you see him in your nightmares, he is the man-beast, he is..."

    "Enough of this la la gagging immediatly!"

    Big Mike grabed the Colonial from the neck and started choking him violently. He didn't let go. Yang's face started turning bright blue, and Big MIke had no choice. He let go.

    "I was chocking you fat fuck!" he yelled up to him. "That's it! You two are under military arrest for herassing a Colonial! Andrews, David, and Greg, report here at once to detain these fools!"

    At that very second came a large chrashing noise. A tall crocodilian head appeard from the night, it was the Spinosaurus. With it's jaws of death hanging down, it grabed a soldier and made a short meal out of him.

    "Open fire men!" yelled Yang as dozens of soldiers ran forward. Big Mike and Justin watched.

    "This is my chance." whispered Big Mike to himself.

    More soldiers ran and opened fire but the dinosaur didn't stop it's rampage. Military equipment got trampeled. Then Big Mike approached. "Spino!" he said.

    "Get back you Armenian bastard!" yelled the Colonial as he ran towards the dinosaur with a gernade in his hands. He was about to throw it when the Spinosaurus caught him in it's jaws and the gernade went off. Blowing the skull of the Spinosaur to bits, and killing Yang.

    "Damn it! That's twice!" Big Mike shouted out in anger...


    Chapter 6



    Dikran Kunemian knocked on Dr. Jekyl's lab door. He must of still been there. Jekyl opened and smilied. "Where is Amber?" he asked.

    "That's not important. We're all dropping like flies. I want out of this mission. Now, just give me half of the money and I'll leave peacefully."

    Jekyl broke out laughing.

    Kunemian took out a knife.

    Jekyl took out a gun, and his laughter stopped. "Dikran, I under estimated you, I thought you would of been picked off soon but you seem to be--still alive and in the mood to kick ass."

    Kunemian glanced to a newspaper article with Dr. Hyde's picture on the cover. The headline read "Hyde's Inventions Run A Muck" and Kunemian couldn't help see how much Jekyl and Hyde look the same. Infact, they look exactly the same! "What the hell?" he whispered.

    "You sound interested in something," said Jekyl. "is it this newspaper?"

    "You and Hyde look the same! Why? You can't be him, he is dead!"

    "Dr. Hyde is really dead, and you will be too--soon."

    Kunemian's mouth hanged down. He couldn't form words.

    Jekyl continued to speak, "Now as this story comes to a close and the plot thickens even more, I'll tell you what you've missed out on, Dikran."

    Kunemian's ears opened and he slowly sat down. Even though Jekyl continued to hold a gun to his head.

    "Remember your little buddy, Dr. Amber?"

    "Of cource I do."

    "I sent her here so you can grow in interest in her and fall passionatly in love with her. And while you where fucking her brains out, you wouldn't give a shit about why I would want those dinosaurs back alive."

    "I never fucked her though, well, she did blow me but that's a different story."

    "And yes, I am really Dr. Hyde, that is why I look so much like him. But my name is Dr. Jekyl. Hyde's second counter part. I'll explain shorty. But where is Amber now?"


    Warm water ran down from Dr. Amber's golden hair all the way to her feet. She rubbed herself with soap and washed it off with water. Making sure all the parts of her body were clean. She closed the pink curtains so none of the shower would get out and closed her eyes to enjoy the warmth.

    She stopped the shower and dried herself off with a towel. Boom! A noise came from downstairs of her home. She quickly threw on some clothing and ran downstairs. There was nothing there. But something had to make the sound, a vase was turned over. Slowly, she crept through the long hallway, and on the other side of the door, the knob started to turn. The door opened. And a raptor was standing there, grinning at her.

    She scrambled to the door and ran outside. Towards Jekyl's lab...


    "I dropped her off at her house. It was close by and she wanted to clean off." said Kunemian. And then listened up again.

    "I see, Dikran. Then she will be fine there. Now, back to how I got here. Before Dr. Hyde was killed by that Tyrannosaur. He cloned himself. Calling his creation, well I, Dr. Jekyl. Due to the altering process, I grew fast. And soon I will die of natural causes. That is why I will clone myself again. So I can live forever! And let those dinosaurs dominate all over the earth!"

    "But I thought you wanted to train them to work with men and clear mines..."

    "And shock troops. That was all a big fat lie. Did you really buy that ludacris story from me? Who the fuck would train dinosaurs to work with men? I plan to breed them in large numbers then release them all over the world!"

    "Your mad. Man can defeat your dinosaurs, Dr. Jekyl. Or should I call you Dr. Hyde. You sick freak!"

    "You can call me what ever you want. Not that you have much time left on your hands, Dikran Kunemian..."


    Dr. Amber frantically ran for her life towards the large Eunice building. Where Jekyl was at the time. And two raptors just so happened to be stalking her at the moment. She tripped and feel a few times, but got right back up. Breathing hard. And scratched up with cuts and scars. Bleeding from her arms, legs, and head. The building came up in front of her. And the sound of the raptors approaching echoed through the back of her mind.

    She stretched out to the door knob, opened it, and ran inside, locking the door behind her. With her back to the door, she slowly slid down and sat down on her butt. Putting her hands up to her head, and started to cry. Footsteps approach from far off in the darkness of the complex.

    "Is anyone out there?" she asked. "I need help."

    No one answered. The worst possible image came to her mind. Dr. Amber got up and started to creep down through the main lobby. And then climbed up the stairs to Jekyl's lab. It was only three floors up.

    Hissing sounds started up. It were the raptors. Dr. Amber knew this. Jekyl's lab was just down the hallway when a raptor materialized from one of the open doors down in the hallway, in the oposite direction. She ran to the lab and reached, but it was locked. Damn! She banged hard but it didn't open before the raptor pounced on her, ripped off her arm and slicing her back open....


    Dikran Kunemian opened the door and Dr. Amber stumbled in with blood gushing from her mouth. The raptor stepped inside too. And locked eyes with Dr. Jacob Jekyl. He pulled the trigger to his gun four times, killing the raptor.

    "Now that it's out of the way. I might as well finish you two off." he said.

    But Kunemian rushed him strong and the gun flew out of his hands. More raptors approached the open door, Kunemian could hear them coming. He threw punches left and right trying to knock him out. So did Hyde. Back and fourth they struggled.

    Then the gun fired again, but not from Hyde or Kunemian. Dr. Amber had managed to crawl and get the gun and fire it with her one good arm. And she had gotten a good shot of Hyde from his back. She took two more shots and he dropped down dead...


    Military helicopters approached the Eunice building.

    Dr. Amber died in Kunemian's arms of blood lose. The raptors soon afterwards invaded the room, but they were too late since Kunemian had gotten out and climbed to the roof of the complex using the fire escape. He knew the choppers could help him out.

    The chopter landed and General Savage stepped out. Along with several soldiers. "Dikran Kunemian?" he asked. "Is that really you?"

    "Well, well, look who it is. My old time war buddy, Savage. What have you been up too?"

    "Going after dinosaurs, my boy. This town has been invaded by them."

    "Listen, all the raptors are in this building right now. Blow it to kingdom come and you'll solve your problem!"

    "Good idea. Men work something out."

    The chopper flew away and the building was destroyed in a perfect white light. "That doctor had a nice ass." Kunemain laughed to himself.

    "Who?"

    "No one, she's dead...."


    Chapter 7


    Before dawn, the military was gone. Morning was close by. Big Mike was walking along with Justin kicking up dirt as he did. He was angry.

    "Listen up man, it wasn't your fault all those dinosaurs were killed. I'm sure this town will again be run over with dinosaurs and more people will get eaten up, giving you a chance to see them again."

    "Yeah, maybe. Until then I'll have to spend my time watching dinosaur movies, and stupid stuff like that."

    "Hey, you want to go find Larry's body and pick at it?"

    "Maybe..."

    They made there way to a parking lot and a dead body was in the middle. It was being feasted upon by a large green dinosaur with a "V" shaped crest on its head. A Dilophosaurus. The one that spits acid.

    "Hey, look over there. Not all the dinosaurs were killed. They must of forgotten that one!"

    They rushed on over to check it out. The dinosaur stepped back and hissed.
    It had been eating up the local town Sheriff. The one that had been called by Officer Larry earlier in the evening.

    Big Mike leaned over and ripped out a organ from the dead body and held it out to the dinosaur. And it ate it. "Hey, it's nice."

    "Is it a Gayosaurus?" asked Justin.

    "No. A Dilophosaurus." said Big Mike. "I think we just made ourselves a new friend. Atleast this night wasn't a total lose."

    The Communist, the Armenian, and the Dinosaur started heading off together in the early morning sun rise...


    THE END


    If this was a movie. Alice In Chain's "Man In the Box" would hit and the credits would start to roll up.
















    6/15/2002 9:34:22 AM
    (Updated: 6/15/2002 9:36:16 AM)

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