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    Raptor 2!(chapters 3-4)
    By Panos

    (WARNING: this fan fic contains violence, language, and sexuality)

    NOTE: This is a sequel to RAPTOR. A smash dino flick from New Horizon. Go and check out the movie today! Until then, read these short chapters...


    Chapter 3

    The doors to Jekyl's research lab swung open. An angry Dikran Kunemian and Sigter Anayansekim stepped in, with evil low hung faces. Jekyl had just been sitting at his computer typing notes for his work. He turned round and smiled towards the two. Amber made her way inside, unsure what to expect.

    Dr. Jacob Jekyl calmly smiled and said, "Well, I see that two of my friends have returned from their task. But where is the third one? Ali Kadri?"

    "Looks like one of your reptilian pets got him," said Sigter.

    Kunemian followed, "It was the one that spits acid."

    "The Dilophosaurus." Amber interupted. "And it's still out there. But I'm about 80% sure it's still in the quarantine of the missile silo."

    "Oh! It is? It looks like our friends are not doing their job."

    Sigter and Kunemian stood there with folded arms. They looked on, but weren't pleased. Sigter spoke, "A member of our team is dead, and your worried about your precious dinosaurs?"

    "More like a crucial part to my research actually." said Jekyl." Now, just to inform you. I've just received word on the TV that there was a wild animal attack near the Warchester Lake. You two mind if you go and check out what was responsible?"

    Two started to nod yes. Kunemian said, "You mind if you lend us a helicopter? I might come in handy for searching for giant lizards from high above. And at a safe range."

    Jekyl continued to smile calmly and said, "No problem. And before you two leave, I would just like to mention that the Spinosaurus is still out there, and it's big. Around fifty-five feet long from tail tip to the end of it's snout. It's a bipedal dinosaur. With a huge sail mounted on it's back. We're not sure what this is for, but probably for ventilation. It's also got a long croc like snout. With a biting force of 3,000 pounds per square inch. I don't want to scare you, just warn you. Not to mention that the pack of raptors are also lose out there, some where. They're smart, too smart. Hyde would tell me how they would trick their feeders into making them think their sick. So they would come. And the raptors would attack and kill them. We've even tested their intelligence. They can notice their own reflections in mirrors. At first the raptors would attack the glass, thinking it was a dinosaur from an another pack, but they learned fast. Plus, they are agile and cunning. The only faster animal out there is the cheetah. There is a curved claw on the legs, witch can cut six feet of meat in a matter of seconds. Making it's victim look like Thanksgiving Day Turkey."

    Sigter looked around, not caring that much. "Thanks for the advice doc."

    "That wasn't advice, it was more like a warning."

    Amber stepped in, "I'm coming too..."


    Something had happened at Warchester Lake less then two hours ago. Large reptilian footprints, three feet in diameter, where every where along the hard ground near the car, or what's left of it. The entire roof had been ripped off. And there was a pile of blood on the seat, and from there the blood trailed to the shoreline. A large animal must have been through there. Since the cops first noticed high branches had been broken.

    "What do you think caused all this, Larry?" asked Officer Tyler.

    "Probably a bear, I guess...?" he replied. "Maybe a cougar."

    "Yup."

    The two officers rubbed their noses of buggers and tightened their belts. Then started to head back to the police car. Leaving behind the twisted car for the toll truck, and the yellow police lines for tomorrow. Their car radio crackled. It was the station. There was a wild party out somewhere. And it was causing a public disturbance among neighbors. They were called to go check it out...


    Minutes pasted....At the edge of the forest Kunemian landed the chopper. Sigter was sitting next to him, and Dr. Amber was in the back.

    "The shoreline is right behind those trees," said Kunemian.

    "I'll go check it out," said Sigter.

    "Don't go Dikran, I need to talk to you for a second," said Amber.

    Sigter had grabbed his gun and was heading far off into the forest. It was dark out at the time of night. And insects buzzed in the background. Amber came in to talk...


    Sigter was prowling through the forest. The ground was damp. As he walked, he would hear the crunching of wet branches and of the bugs that he would accidentally step on. He slapped himself, in hopes of catching a pesky mosquito that landed on his right cheek. Then he started to scratch his ass, cause it started to itch. He heard noises in the distance. Something large was moving in the far distance. He started hear thumping sounds emit...


    Back at the chopper...

    "So what did you do after that?" asked Amber. She was riveted and she leaned in to listen to Kunemian's story.

    "Well, I briefly fought in the Lebanon Civil War, back in the 70s. And--after that I did some odd jobs for a few rich people. It put money in my pocket. Until the early 90s when I went in fought in the Armenian/Azerbejian war conflict over Karabagh. I wounded my leg seriously, and was in the hospital for a while. But I'm okay now. As you see I am a mercenary. And believe me, everyone needs one of us..."


    The forest erupted. Birds flew out of the trees, and into the sky. Small forest animals took shelter. A monster busted out from behind the trees. The Spinosaurus. And started to run after Sigter! He panicked and dropped his tranq gun and started to run for his life. The creature continued the pursuit. If only he could reach the chopper in time, he could be safe....


    At that point, Dr. Amber, had her head down on Kunemian's lap, and was blowing him. Dikran was leaned back against the cockpit chair and was going with the flow. Why the hell was she sucking my dick? He thought to himself.

    She pulled up and started to rub her lower jaw. "My mouth hurts, it's numb."

    Dikran chuckled and said, "Don't worry, it happens to a lot of girls..." But before he could continue to speak, there was yelling deep within the forest. Sigter!

    He busted out of the forest, waiving his hands in the air. His face told it all, Kunemian had never seen him so frightened before.

    Sigter yelled, "Start up the fucking chopper, there is a fucking dinosaur behind me!"

    Amber raised her head from him and looked out the front windshield in confusion. Fluid ran down from her mouth. Kunemian quickly zipped up his pants.

    It was Sigter all right. He had run out of the forest. And now she knew why. Behind him came a twenty foot tall dinosaur. Spinosaurus. Sigter turned around one last time to see the predator. And it's jaws were closing in on him. "Nooo!!!!" He managed to scream out before the dinosaur got him....And he was gone in one bite!

    "Oh my God!" said Amber. "Start the engines before it decides to come after us as well!"

    But Kunemian was already on top of that. The propellors had already started to spin around, that he dinosaur had started to approach them, carefully. The chopper started to take altitude, and he Spinosaurus was grinning at them from below. "Can It reach us?" asked Kunemian. As he said that, the dinosaur jumped up and attempted to catch the aircraft. As the dinosaur fell back to Earth, the ground rumbled. Dikran almost lost balance of the chopper and crashed! But regained control. The dinosaur was left in the area, and went back to search for food...


    On the chopper...It was nearing 12 a.m. and Kunemian has lost two of his companions that night. And who knows what else might happen.

    "We better go and pay Jekyl another visit. We keep dropping like flies."

    Amber's mind was else where. "That dinosaur was still hungry. Who knows how much food it's after. It might wonder into town. And the raptors, we still don't know where they are. Damn birds--so fucking smart."

    "Birds?"

    "Yeah, it's known that dinosaurs like raptors actually evolved from birds."

    "Then lets turn them into turkey stuffing..."


    Chapter 4


    A cop car halted in front of a one family house, on Olympia Drive. The music was blasting, Officer Tyler and Larry could hear the racket all the way from their police vehicle.

    "Should we bust them? Or just let it pass?" asked Tyler.

    "I think we should join. You know, drink back some beers, sniff some--you know--and maybe we can even get laid. You never know high school girls these days..." replied Larry. "I love that song--what was the name? It's from System of a Down, 'When Angels Deserve To Die' that's it!" as he started to dance in an idiotic way, and he threw his police cap up high...

    Tyler caught it in midair. "You're an idiot, you know that? How the hell did you end up my partner any how?"

    "Okay...okay...lets go check it out. But I say, we should go from the back. It's better to surprise them..."

    They started to walk up the drive way. Tyler walked up ahead, and Larry trailed behind making faces at him...


    It was past midnight, and the two cops were in for a big night. Because a big surprise was awaiting for them. The two paced themselves to the back door. It was unlocked. Tyler pointed his flashlight in random directions around the backyard. And the music was still playing loud, but no signs of kids having fun inside. Suspicion arose over the two officers.

    "I'll go check out inside, and you'll wait here, okay Tyler?"

    In response, he sighed yes. Larry made his way inside.


    Moments past...and there was no sign of Larry anywhere. Even if he had found something inside, he should have contacted him with his two way radio. There was a noise heard from inside. Something was making its way to the door. Tyler prepared for the worst, he got out his hand gun. "Freeze!" he yelled.

    A young teen, no older then 17 had managed to get to the door and opened it. He was gasping for air, while blood gushed down from his wounds. He had been cut open pretty bad. He started to speak, "Oh my God...I thought no one would come looking for us...I think I'm the only one that is left...we were all attacked by some kind of..."

    The sound of bullets erupted! And the young teen fell into the arms of Tyler. He had been shot 3 times in the back. More noise continued...something was running towards the back. It was Larry. He gave a quick giggle. "Oh shit. I thought he was the killer..."

    "Holy shit, Larry, you killed this kid," said Tyler. "Wait...I know him too, it's the Steven's kid from two blocks down from here. There is no way they are going to sound happy when you tell them what happened..."

    "We've got a bigger problem. Step inside."

    Inside, the place was littered with dead bodies. There were at least half a dozen in the basement alone! And more in the upper levels of the home.

    "Who the hell did this?" asked Tyler.

    "What the hell did this? It must be some kind of animal. They were all attacked by something that entered the house. But what?"

    "My wife?" asked Tyler. "No, can't be, these poor kids were partially eaten as well..."

    "I'll call the Sherif, where ever he is, and I'll get some boys down here for an investigation. This might go far up as the FBI. Until then lets search town for what ever it was that did this. What ever it was, should still be hanging around here somewhere..."


    The radio crackled; a red light bleeped. It was Officer Larry trying to reach Sherif Bernie over the two way radio.

    "...Sherif do you copy? Bernie where the hell are you? We've got..."

    All Bernie did was turn off the sound, and Larry's voice went dead. He happened to have catched him at the wrong time. Since, Bernie was in the drivers' seat of his police vehicle; having problems...

    "Are you ready yet?" asked the female sitting next to him.

    "No, I'm not..." he replied.

    "How about now?"

    "Almost ready..." the Sherif said. He was an old obese man, well into his 50s; the most distinctive part about him was his cowboy hat that he always wore, and his Southern accent.

    He had his right hand down his pants, and he was thrusting hard to get his gun ready to fire.

    "Your pathetic..." said the female once more. She was Candy, a girl that he had picked up minutes before. "That's it. Just give me the money, and I'll leave now, okay?"

    "Leave!? Wait! My gun is loaded, but it just can't fire--right now!" he argued. "Don't leave! Please!"

    "Fine...fine...let me just walk around outside. I hate to sit around and watch a man fight with his penis." She said as she opened the door and slammed it hard as she left the scene.

    "What a loser..." she whispered to herself. Behind her came to sound of a car window lowering...

    It was Bernie. And he started to yell. "Its not ready yet. But do you want to play around with my handcuffs?"

    Candy kept walking, not replying to his question.

    "Okay, maybe next time!"

    She stopped at a few bushes; which led into a forest. There she took out a cigarette and started smoking. When she turned around, she saw the car was about 150 yards away, parked in the parking lot of the police station. And it looked like to her, that Bernie was still having problems. That fruit! She felt like leaving and going home when she heard something rustle in the fauna in front of her.

    "Who is there?" she asked. "A Peeping Tom?" Anyone could have spied on them two back in the car. Who knows who is out there. She waited, but there was no answer. Candy felt not safe, so she started to make her way back to the car. Sure she would have to face Bernie, but she would be safe with the Sherif. Right?

    Half way there she stopped and opened her ears for any sound. She wasn't sure, but she could have sworn that something was out there. Watching her....There was a sound out there! When she listened carefully, she could hear deep breathing and a slight hiss every few seconds. Footsteps followed. She dared not turn around. Then the breathing grew on the back of her neck, it was warm and evil...

    Instantly her neck was trapped in the jaws of an animal of some sort. And two claws grabbed her side and flung her on to the hard ground. Dazed, she started to stand up when she got to see a clear picture of the creature. It looked like a lizard on two legs, with brown scales covered all over. But most of all, Candy noticed the scythe-like claw on both feet. The creature cocked its head back and charged. Candy was knocked down, and her head hit the ground hard. She fell out of conscienceness. The claws of the animal started to rip and pull apart Candy's flesh...

    Back at the car, Bernie started to rise. "It's ready!" he yelled out the window! But it was too late, he started to cum. "Shit!" He felt embarrassed, but it wasn't long before he noticed that Candy was laying bloody on the ground, and a strange creature was hovering over her. "What the hell?" he whispered to himself, as he got his real gun ready. Now the creature was dragging Candy's body into the woods...


    "Damn! Where the hell is the Sherif?" complained Officer Larry. "I keep trying his house and the radio. No one is answering!"

    "I had a bad felling about this night, like something is gonna' happen. But what? What ever it is, it's started," said Tyler.

    The two officers were driving around in their car, searching around for anything strange. And "strange" wasn't too far away. In front of the road, some kind of two legged lizard, about seven feet tall, darted fast across the street. And into the backyard of someone's house...

    "Did you just see that?" asked Larry shocked, his mouth hanged down, wide open.

    "Yeah..."

    "It must have escaped from a zoo..."

    "I strongly doubt that, Larry, I think I know what is happening...try to contact the Sherif again."

    Sherif Bernie carefully walked on over towards where he last saw Candy's body being dragged off. A calm mist of fog had set in, late that night. And not much was visible in the darkness. He looked back to remember the police radio, he should have called backup, but he didn't want to go back...

    Hissing sounds came from behind. He turned round ready with his gun, ready for anything. Far off in the distance, unknown footsteps ringed. "Hello?" he asked confused, while staring into the haze of mist. From out of it can a blood drooling animal. It stood up like a man, and was holding a severed arm with its left hand. The claws grasped the arms tight, while blood poured out from the cut. Then the animal bit rest of the flesh and finished the arm in front of the Sherif. Then ran off into the fog...

    Shocked at what he had just witnessed, he put down the gun, which he was too frightened at the moment to use, and he fast paced himself towards the police car.

    As he got in, he noticed the police radio's red light was bleeping. Someone was trying to contact him. He turned up the volume and Officer Larry's voice came over. "Bernie do you copy?"

    "This is Sherif Bernie, Larry? I presume you know what is going on? I just saw a giant lizard--attack a women," he said over the radio, while cold sweat started to come down his face.

    "Yeah, Sherif. What ever it is, it did a number on the kids at some party. We just saw it run into private property."

    "What!? I just saw it a second ago!"

    "Then there must be two of them--maybe more. Tyler insists we contact the Pentagon immediately. He says, he knows what they are...according to him, they're dinosaurs. Remember the incident that happened here? A few people where killed. But they did say all the dinosaurs where killed. Well, I guess they are wrong now..." Two objects caught the eye of Larry as he was speaking. "Hey, Sherif, you go and call the Pentagon and tell them what is happening. In the mean time, we have some investigating to do..." he shut his radio, and started to drive slowly towards to two objects. They seemed to be pacing themselves down the block...


    Mike and Justin were scroling down the sidewalk, soon after leaving a party which had turned dull with heroine and alcohol.

    "Hey, Big Mike; remember when those dinosaurs appeared in this town. A bunch of people got eaten. Like that guy, Tommy. You were so pissed off that none of the dinosaurs ran into you. You vowed to see one one day. But don't worry; when there is a will, there is a way. Even if you don't see one, there is always 'feathered dinosaurs' you know like chickens and turkeys." said Justin.

    Mike couldn't hear him well. He was drunk, while waiving a half filled beer bottle in his left hand. A CD player was strapped to his belt, and head phones ran down from his ears. Mike was chanting some weird language. "Ayoh Ayoh!" he said. "I 'kunem' all the girls in this town!"

    "Big Mike, what he fuck are you listening too?"

    "System of a Down--Toxicity!" he blurted out in English.

    "Man, your listening to those fucking Armenian Terrorists? They're probably out now bombing something like Azerbaijan or some hell hole like that..."
    "Freeze you scum bags!" a loud voice came from a cop car, not to far away on the street. Two officers exited and scrambled out of their vehicle, and charged forward with their hand guns and police clubs. "Get down on the ground, you dirt bags!"

    "You sons of bitches!" the second officer yelled.

    But Big Mike and Justin just stood there confused to what was happening. Justin started to whisper in Mike's ear. "Jewish Nazi Vampires, they come out on nights like these." Mike continued to sing and chant, and waive his arms around because he was drunk.

    "What the fuck is your major malfunction son?" one of the officers asked Mike.

    "It's not his fault; he was born this way." said Justin.

    The two officers stood back and started to laugh. "Okay, we'll take you back to Pakistan." They started to grab Mike and started to move him towards the back of the police car. Then pushed in violently into the back of the vehicle.

    "What the fuck are you doing'?" asked Justin.

    "You two are under arrest!"

    "I refuse!"

    "No you will not refuse. You better go with us, or you'll be also charged with refusing arrest!"

    "What's the original charge?"

    "You two are being taken in for suspects to the murder of several kids."

    Officer Tyler budged in. "It's the dinosaurs..."

    "No! We can't take that chance...we have to take these two scum bags in for questioning!"

    Big Mike jolted up and awoke from his drunken mood and said, "Dinosaurs!? What dinosaurs?"

    "Nothing son...just stay in the fucking car!" said the Officer. Something moved out in the dark shadows...

    Officer Tyler started to whisper: "I think it's the dinosaurs, they're back!"

    "Dinosaurs!" Big Mike repeated.

    "Just over grown lizards, if you ask me..."

    "Yeah, and I'm the Queen of England..." said Big Mike.

    Justin bowed down. "Your Royal Highness..."

    "Enough!" said the Officer. "You too, in the car, pronto! Or you'll make us angry, you won't like us when Warchester Cops are angry!"

    More movement came from far off, on the street corner. A dark figure knocked over a few garbage cans. And bags of junk were spread all over the street. A tall reptilian biped started to make it's way to the cop car. Where all four men where. Big Mike shouted in joy! "Christ! It's a living, breathing, fucking dinosaur! And it's heading our way! Thank you God!"

    The two officers were startled and shocked by what they were looking at. They panicked, and instead of taking out their guns..."Lets get in the fucking car and get the fuck out of here!" yelled Officer Larry out loud!

    "Get in the car son..." said Officer Tyler towards Justin.

    "Bite my ass you commie bastard!"

    "This is no time for arguing, your life is in danger!"

    "Okay--okay..." The dinosaur was moving closer. "I'll get in..." The door slammed hard. All the windows where down. Everybody was in the car. Officer Larry started up the car. A large dark object rammed hard to the side of the car. It was hideous, like something out a Hell, scales covered it's body from the tail tip to the end of the snout, and blood drooled down from it's mouth. Two curved claws were mounted on the feet of the creature. It opened it's jaws and let out an angry growl. The smell of rotting human flesh was common in the air. The hand claws started to work through the metallic shell of the car. Officer Tyler started to try contacting the Sherif. Larry was struggling to start the car up.

    "Holy Shit!" said Big Mike. The biggest smile was planted in his face. And his eyes had the biggest shine. "I'm seeing a real fucking dinosaur! I hope I get eaten. It will make up for this horrible boring day!" He watched on in enjoyment.

    The car started to move. Larry calmed down. But the dinosaur was no where to be seen. That was because it was on the roof! Several of the animal's claws and teeth came scratching and ripping the top of the car, as it traveled down the street.

    "Try to shake it off, Larry!" yelled Tyler. "Just get it off. I've got four kids and a wife to worry about!"

    The claws digger deeper into the passenger seated area of the car. Now a big hole was made. The entire limb of the creature had made it's way through and was lashing out at anything it could catch. The car was speeding side to side, out of control!

    "Shake it off God damn it!" said Tlyer again. "Just get rid of it!" BANG! Officer Larry crashed into the side of a large tree. He had some blood on his face, but no one else seemed to be hurt. The creature was no longer attacked them.

    "Is it gone?" asked Officer Larry.

    "I hope it comes back!" said Big Mike. He probably didn't even know that an accident had taken place. He was too over joyed by the sight of the dinosaur.

    Justin said, "This is just like Dinosaur Island, only there aren't any hot chicks in cavewomen outfits, and the dinosaurs are real, not fake little plastic ones..."

    Once more, something hard banged up against the side of the car. It was the raptor, it had returned. And it had busted through the front passenger side window. Before anyone knew what had happened, the creature had Tyler's head by it's jaws, and had started to drag him out. As a panicked Tyler struggled, he accidentally kicked Larry hard in the face. Breaking his noise. Blood started to come down his face. And Tyler grabbed his gun, in hopes to shot the animal. But he fired by mistake, and shot Larry in the leg...

    The raptor had now dragged Tyler off somewhere. It was too dark to see anything. But Tyler's struggling and screams were echoed through the night. But in a second, a large bone chrushing sound erupted. And it was all quite. Slowly, the noise of flesh being ripped and chewed on started to role by the car.

    Larry wasn't moving. With one hand, he was holding his nose really tight. And his leg, where he was shot.

    "What should we do?" asked Justin.

    Larry didn't answer.

    "I say we go and check out the dinosaur eating that poor cop." asked Big Mike. He reached on over to open the door, but it was locked. "Damn it, please open the door Officer. I want to check out that dude getting eaten!"

    Larry didn't answer. He gasped deep and reached his hand, which he was holding his nose with, and grabbed the radio. Static. Nothing but static. "What the fuck? This night is creeping me out!"


    Chapter 5

    Coming Soon!










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