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The Error from Another Site , The Prolouge
By Dino-Snore
THE ERROR FROM ANOTHER SITE
DANTARTICA , WINTER , 2002
( Snow , white , Cold , powdery feeling , it is the Bed Sheet for Evil , plus , it's why Scientists are there ! Anyway , off in the distance , a Helicopter flies , it looks like it's been in Battle , because ther are Scuff Marks , and Bruises all over it , plus one of the Pilot's Windows' are cracked , this thin ran into something HUGE ! It's destination : A Small Building in the Middle of Nowhere )
WELCOME TO BIG MAGNET
( Standing outside Big Magnet , wearing a Heavy Parka , is Sinornis , the Scientist in charge of Big Magnet )
S : What the hell ?
( The Chopper lands badly , and one of the doors open , Big Magnet Leader Dac steps out )
S : Captain ?
( Dac looks like he was set on fire )
Dac : How are you ?
S : I'm, okay , what happened ?
Dac : There was an Explosion at the Site......We lost 4 People......I dont know what happened , but I think the Tape will.....
( Dac pulls a Tape out from his Scorched Parka )
S : Anything else ?
( A Door on the Chopper opens , another Magnetarian , Raptoralpha , steps out , he too looks scorched , but he is towing something out of the chopper )
S : WHAT THE HELL ?
LATER.......
( Dac , S , and RA have gotten the Ice Block into a Storage room in Big Magnet )
S : Where did you find this ?
Dac : Shortly before the Blast......We were digging this and the other discovery out.......I think it's time to......Start investigation......
S : You okay ?
Dac : Yeah....blast...toolk alot out of me.....Al.....you should....secure.....this find.....
RA : Sure....I'll lock it down , nice and tight....
MEANWHILE......
( The Other 3 Occupants of Big Magent : Radio Man Chamdar , Computer Expert Stealth Raptor 2 , and Supply Chief Veloci Josh , are working in the Control Room of Big Magnet )
Dac ( Entering ) : ATTENTION......Guys , I know some of you were Aware of the Mysterious Explosion that claimed the lives of 4 People we have worked with for 8 Weeks........Well.....I have proof........that there was an Alien Force ar Work !
( Dac jams the Tape he has been Holding for Hours , and presses Play , On the Screen , the Team sees 2 Men , Obviously Dac and RA , with Shovels digging at something in the Snow , in the Background , 4 Men in Parkas are planting Thermite Charges )
BOOOOOOOOOOM !
( There's a Massive Explosion , Scientific Equipment flies everywhere , RA has been lifted into the Air , he lands on his Back a few meters away , the Camera falls over , a Drill punches a Hole in the Motor of a Tractor , resulting in a Smaller Explosion , the Chopper is being pelted by Debris , as the Explosion clears of death , we discover Dac has been Set on fire )
Dac on TV : OWWWWW !
( Dac rolls in the Snow , just as a piece of Metal strikes the Camera , killing it , the screen goes to static )
Dac : As you can see.....I was...on fire......
SR2 : My god.....
VJ : Holy Crap......
C : Great Farts in a Can.....
S : So that's why you're out of it !
Dac : Listin you guys.....I want to go back in the morning......so......let's all get some sleep......
MEANWHILE
( RA just finished wrapping the 11th Chain around the Ice Block )
RA : Man....it gets cold out here.....Better heat up !
( RA turns on the Oven , sets it to MAX POWER , goes to get some Coffee , but , as the Heat of the room starts to build , the Ice Block starts to melt , and there's something inside the Block , coming to Life...... )
LATER......
( Outside , it is now nightime , Inside , Dac is sitting in the control room , drinking some Hot Tea , S enters )
S : I sure cant see a thing out there at night........I'm going to go and check on Al......
Dac : No....you go and get some sleep.....I'll check on him.....
( Dac starts towards the Storage Room , However , outside , someone is watching him.....following him ! Dac enters the Storage room , and instead of RA and an Ice Block , sees Carnage and a Hollowed-Out Ice Block ! )
Dac : What the ? What happened here ?
Mysterious Figure : Uh Oh !
( Dac looks out the window and sees his Stalker running away , Dac pulls out a Flare and a Pistol , goes outside )
Dac : Al ? AL ???
( Dac lights his flare and goes in prusuit of his Stalker , until he runs up to a Shed : The Dog Shed , the Door is open ! )
Dac : Crap.....
( Dac goes inside , finds the Office is okay , goes into the Kennel , sees a Man , judging by the Clothes , it's RA ! )
Dac : Al ? Al ? You okay ?
( Without warning , RA turns around ? IT'S NOT RA ! Instead it's a BLUE-SKINNED , RED EYED DEVIL , WITH 3 EYES !!!! )
Error : I AM THE ERROR FROM ANOTHER SITE ! I CAME HERE TO ASSIMILATE THE PLANET EARTH !
Dac : NEVER !
Error : PREPARE TO DIE !
( Without warning , the Dogs leap out of their Beds , and tackle RA-Error without warning , wait a minute , did I say " Without Warning " Twice ?!!?? )
Dac : GOTTA GET OUTTA HERE !
( RA's Hand reaches out , turns into a Blue-Multi-Tenticled Claw Hand and grabs onto a Dog's Head , Dac dives out of the Shed , opens fire on the the Shed , his 3rd Bullet strikes a Gas Tank )
BOOM !
( The Shed Explodes ! Dac yells in Victory as he hears the Dying moans of the Error ! )
Dac : YES , I'VE WON !
Error : NOT QUITE ! I AM EVERYWHERE !
( Dac swears , runs towards Big Magnet , goes inside , runs into the Control Room , Activates the CCTV , and sees someone in the Labratory )
Man : HEY ? WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE ? WHAT THE ? AGGHHHHH !
( On the CCTV , a tenticle leaps out , grabs the Man , and yanks him into a Nook )
Dac : Okay.....
( Dac runs into the Storage Room , Gets a Box of Containers full of Acid , some Guns , and a Ton of Ammo..... goes back into the Control Room , and activates the Intercom )
Dac : ALL PERSONEL , REPORT TO THE CONTROL ROOM !
( Slowly , VJ , S , C , and SR2 walk in , some look like they were in Deep Sleep )
Dac : Okay.....Guys , I'm going to tell you this.....that Ice Block we brought back Had an Alien in it ! And it took the form of RA ! I had to Innmolate it ! I am also starting to think One of YOU Is not YOU ! So....I rigged a little Blood Test !
( Dac holds up a Glue-Gun , rigged to hold a Container full of Acid )
Dac : Josh ?
( VJ steps up holds out his arm , Dac stabs VJ's arm , holds up the Collecter , and pulls the trigger , Blood fills the Acid Container , nothing......)
Dac ( Resetting the Collecter ) : Okay , grab a Gun !
( VJ Grabs a Gun , aims it at the others , but S gies RA a look meaning Dac might be crazy , so VJ aims it at Dac )
Dac : Next !
( SR2 Steps up , gets his blood into the Container , Nothing , SR2 steps aside )
Dac : NEXT !
( S steps up now , holds out his arm , gets stabbed , and Dac starts to collect his Blood , but....THE CONTAINER EXPLODES )
Dac : YOU !
( S-Error shoves Dac aside , bursts-out into his 3 Red-Eyed , Blue Skinned , Tenticle Form , C dives bhind a Computer , SR2 hides behind VJ )
VJ : DIE !
( VJ opens fire , pumps the Error full of Lead , it falls over )
Dac ( Pulling out his gun ) : Get Back !
C : It's Dead !
( A Tenticle shoos out of The Error's Stomach , iit grabs C's head and tears it off )
Dac : FIRE !
( Dac and VJ open fire , The Error takes the first Dozen Bullets , then runs out of the room )
Dac : Crap ! Radio for Help !
( They turn and see the Radio has been Smashed up by a Baseball Bat )
Dac : Oh...sorry , I forgot about that......
LATER.....
( Dac , SR2 , and VJ are all outside , wearing Parkas , in front of them is the chopper )
Dac : Okay , we need to get the hell out of here.....this Error has to be left behind !
( Suddenly , the lights all go out )
Dac : Now what ?
( Dac lights a flare , turns to the others )
Dac : It wants to go to sleep now....we must destroy it ! I have an Idea !
LATER.....
( Inside a Corridor of Big Magnet , Dac and SR2 work Feverishly to Set up explosives )
Dac : Okay , we wired every other room up ( he pulls out his Radio ) , Josh , see anything ?
VJ ( O.R. ) : Nope !
Dac : GOOD ! ( He puts away his Radio ) Will you go out into the hall and check for any monsters while I rig the Generator to Blow ?
SR2 : Sure....
( SR2 goes into the Hallway , looks up , and yells as the Error rips his Lower Torso out from Under him )
Dac : Okay , I finished the Rigging , lets get outta.....SR2 ? SR2 !?!?1 ( Pulls out Radio ) Josh , I lost SR2 , GET TO THE CHOPPER , NOW ! Josh ? JOSH !!!!
( Without warning , the Error charges at Dac from Nowhere , and this time , there are no Dogs or Gun-Toting Friends to help him this time ! )
Dac : CRAP !
( Dac dodges a Claw attack , crouches down , lights a whole Thing of TNT , throws it at the Error and RUNS ! )
Dac ( Jumping out the door ) : GO TO HELL , AND STAY THERE !
BBBOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM
( Big Magnet EXPLODES ! )
LATER.......
( Dac is resting inside the chopper , nearly asleep , he had one hell of a day today , 2 Explosions , a Few Run in's with a Monster , the Deaths of 9 People.....Wait a minute....why is ther a figure heading for him ? It;s VJ ! )
VJ ; Where's SR2 ?
Dac : Dead , where were you ?
VJ : Though I saw the Error , chased after him.....is it dead ?
Dac : Yeah , we might be in a few hours......come on , let's see what we can do to get the hell outta here !
THE NEXT DAY
The Horrible fire that was once Big Magnet was reduced to a Smoke Trail now.....Dac and VJ have prepped the Chopper to get outta here , but just as they were about to leave , they saw it : A Dog , emerging from the Shed Wreckage , and out onto the Ice )
Dac : DARN IT ALL TO HECK !
10/19/2002 3:08:02 PM
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