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    The TLW novel mentions dinosaur-like creatures rumored to exist in the jungles of the Congo. Called 'mokele-mbembe', several expeditions to find them have so far turned up nothing. (From: Deinonyclaw)
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    --Home Sweet Home-- Part 10
    By Carnotaur3

    93 INT. CAR – DAY 93

    GABBY looked over at the door. It unlocked itself.
    All she could do was watch it happen and see DAN
    leap at her after opening it up.

    His fierceness burned in his eyes. As soon as if
    had begun, he had his hands around her neck,
    choking her to death!

    Her hands flew up at his face, she started to smack
    at his cheeks.

    DAN
    You thought you could get away with
    it, didn’t you. You thought you
    could leave me and come back to see
    if I was dead. Nice plan, but it
    didn’t work!

    She punched him in the face and then, kicked at his chest. He fell backward out of the car and onto the driveway.

    93 EXT. DRIVEWAY – DAY 93

    He looked up to see GABBY running back up to the
    front door of the house. With all that was thrown
    and kicked and hit on him, he finally was getting
    the full effect.

    He got back up to his feet, still dizzy.

    She struggled to the door of the house and finally
    made it in.

    CUT TO:

    94 INT. HOUSE – DAY 94

    GABBY ran inside just in time. Behind, was DAN,
    yelling at her!
    CUT TO:

    94 EXT. HOUSE – DAY 94

    As the door shut, DAN rammed into it, screaming off
    the top of his lungs!

    DAN
    DAMN IT, GABBY!

    CUT TO:

    95 INT. HOUSE – DAY 95

    The next thing GABBY saw, was the door opening
    itself. She had just locked it and now it seemed
    the ghosts were back at work.

    She raced to the media room, Dan followed behind.

    As Gabby went behind the long couch, Dan entered
    the room.

    He was on the other side, watching her every move.
    She looked over to the wall and picked up a golf
    club.

    DAN
    (Noticing the club in her hand)

    Awww… How cute! The bitch has a
    club!

    (Starts to beat his chest)

    Come on give me a big smack-a-roo
    with it! Come on!

    She forced who self to slash it through the air.

    Dan DUCKED.

    DAN (cont’d)
    Not good enough, Baby!

    She threw a golf ball straight at his head.

    It bounced off like a ping pong ball. It sounded
    as if she had cracked his skull open. But she knew
    she hadn’t.

    He touched his forehead.

    BLOOD streamed down his face.

    DAN (cont’d)
    DAMN! BITCH!

    GABBY swung the golf club and knocked his lights
    out.

    He fell to the floor lifeless.

    She ran to check on his breathing. He was still breathing.

    She didn’t think he would die.

    Thinking quickly, she ran for the front door of the house. The door was stuck, she couldn’t get it to
    open.

    She ran for her bedroom upstairs.

    96 INT. BEDROOM – DAY 96

    GABBY reached the bedroom as fast as she could and went to the window.

    ROBERT was not in sight, where could he have gone.

    Suddenly, the door closed behind her. She struggled to get it open, but to no avail.


    She fell to the ground, her spirits didn’t look
    high at all. She had to think positive and find a way out.

    She looked up at the ceiling.

    Then, she whimpered.

    FADE TO:


    97 EXT. SIDE OF HOUSE – NIGHT 97

    ROBERT lay on his back on the grassy ground. Each
    breath he took he ended up wheezing. He was still hurting, really badly!

    His face was blank, as he looked up at the clear
    black sky. The stars speckled, which gave him HOPE!

    98 INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT 98

    GABBY was in bed, her eyes rolled up to the back of
    her head. She was SLEEPING.

    As she sleeps, we hear a bumping coming from
    downstairs. She can’t hear it.

    CUT TO:

    99 INT. STAIRCASE – NIGHT 99

    BUMP.

    BUMP.

    The sound of DAN’S FOOTSTEPS banged through the
    house. It looked as if he had hurt his left leg,
    because he was dragging it as he walked up the
    steps.

    COMING UP THE STAIRS, DAN grasped a screw driver.
    He SCOOTED up the steps with the EVILEST GRIN.

    CUT BACK TO:

    100 INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT 100

    GABBY was still asleep, until…

    BANG.

    BANG.

    DAN was charging at the door!

    CUT BACK TO:

    101 INT. HALL – NIGHT 101

    The DOOR made a loud noise, with each THRUST he did.

    His screams of terror and the banging of the door
    had woke GABBY up.

    The door started to budge a little.

    DAN
    Oh ho! I’m getting in TONIGHT!

    CUT BACK TO:

    102 INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT 102

    GABBY jumped up from the bed and pressed her hands together. She started to pray. We can still hear
    his screaming.

    THEN…

    The DOOR OPENED.

    DAN leaped forward to the bed and swung his screw
    driver toward GABBY’S head. In an instant, GABBY
    ducked, making the screw driver catch air.

    DAN reacted slowly, looking over at GABBY and
    seeing her run out of the threshold.

    103 INT. STAIRCASE - NIGHT 103

    She ran down the STAIRS fast, and right behind her
    she could hear his footsteps and his breathing.

    DAN
    Why can’t you just be still?!

    CUT TO:

    104 INT. BASEMENT – NIGHT 104

    We watch as she comes down the stairs and into the BASEMENT.
    DAN (cont’d)
    This is a game, oh I get it!

    She went passed the ping pong table and on the
    other side of it. DAN was at the other end of the
    table.

    DAN (cont’d)
    We’re gonna play fair! Aren’t we?

    She stood in disbelief in what DAN was trying to do.

    GABBY
    Why are you doing this?

    DAN
    Well, too late for 20 questions, is
    it?

    He ran up to her she kicked him in the stomach and
    he fell to the floor.

    (IN SLOW MOTION)

    GABBY falls from the kick she did and lands on the carpet. DAN finds himself with blood on his head.
    He had hit the side of the ping pong table.

    GABBY crawls to get away from DAN.

    DAN looks over and picks up a hockey stick he saw
    on the ground. He takes the hockey stick and turns
    it on the end and hits it on the ground. He started
    to pull his weight on it to lift himself up.

    GABBY finds she has no where to run or hide, and
    looks up to see DAN with the hockey stick. He lifts
    it in the air, signaling it was going to come down
    on her.

    Then, from out of no where, ROBERT showed up and
    rammed his body into DAN.

    (END SLOW MOTION)

    DAN hits the floor once again.

    ROBERT
    You ok?

    DAN takes the hockey stick back up in his hands.

    GABBY
    (TO ROBERT)

    Look OUT!

    The STICK hit ROBERT in the ankle, causing him to
    fall to the ground.

    He met DAN on the ground.

    DAN started to punch him in the face constantly and then, got to his feet to start kicking him.

    After a few kicks, ROBERT lay moaning in pain.

    (SLOW MOTION)

    DAN stood straight up, his smile looking evil.

    (END SLOW MOTION)

    He took the HOCKEY STICK and lifted up in the air, faster this time.

    GABBY
    Please!

    DAN
    Too late, GAB!

    GABBY
    Dan, you are my husband.

    DAN
    (Getting ready to thrust the stick)

    I know that!

    GABBY
    To death do us part!

    DAN
    And death is about to happen, baby!


    GABBY
    (Starts to cry)

    You love me, and I love you!

    DAN
    What makes you think I love you?

    GABBY
    You love me.

    He started to hold back. The REAL DAN was coming
    back.

    His hand dropped the hockey stick and he started
    going into convulsions.

    After that, he looked up to see GABBY. He was
    crying.

    DAN
    GABBY!

    She crawled into his arms.

    DAN (cont’d)
    I’m sorry, Gab! I’m sorry!

    GABBY
    It wasn’t you!

    DAN looked back towards ROBERT.

    DAN
    Robert, you ok?

    ROBERT got up slowly.

    ROBERT
    I’ll live.

    DAN
    I’m sorry, Robert!

    The group heard a sound coming from underneath the
    ping pong table.

    The table started to spin out of control.

    ROBERT
    Come on, lets go!

    The THREE ran to the staircase that led up to the
    upper floor. But ROBERT stood behind.

    DAN
    What are you doing?

    ROBERT looked back.

    ROBERT
    Just go!

    (BEAT)

    TAKE ME!

    The winds picked up into the room. GABBY ran to ROBERT.

    GABBY
    No, Robert, we can all make it!

    Something picked ROBERT up in the air and he ended up sliding on the ground to the ping pong table.

    ROBERT
    WOAH!

    He headed head first under the table. Looking over
    to his left side, he saw the leg of the table lift
    up in the air.

    Terrified, he constantly swatted the air, trying to
    grab the leg. The other leg lifted up as well.

    He screamed in horror as the table collapsed on his neck, splitting his head off.

    ROBERT’S head came rolling away from under the
    table.

    DAN and GABBY stood horrified.

    DAN
    To HELL with this HOUSE!

    The house started to rock back and forth. It was
    the earthquake they had felt before.

    DAN grabbed GABBY’S shoulder, pulling her back to
    him.

    DAN
    Come, on! Let’s get the HELL out of
    here!



    (TO BE CONTINUED WITH "THE CONCLUSION")




















































































































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