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Blackened Waters
By BleedBlackLabel
Blackened Waters
**An introduction to Herb**
Outside on Driveway, Lorrance is talking to Warren
Lorrance: “You dumb piece of shit! Do you have no brains at all? How can you be so one-sided and stupid on different subjects? It depends on the matter the glass was filled whether it’s half empty or half full.”
Warren: “I don’t understand what you talking about, I say its half full no matter what.”
Lorrance: “Were you in the remedial classes in school? Here is what the proper reasoning on this subject is: If you fill a glass to the top, then it is full. Do you agree with that Warren?”
Warren: Nods head “Yeah.”
Lorrance: “Ok, then if you fill an empty glass halfway, then it would be half full. Here is where you get stupider than the minister at the Catholic church, If you fill a glass to the top, and pour it all out, the then glass is empty. Is that correct jackass?
Warren: Nods head slowly “Yeah. But…”
Lorrance: “No fucking buts, shut the fuck up for a second and fucking listen. If you fill a glass to the top, and pour out half of it, then the glass is fucking half empty. That’s all there is to it.”
Warren: “I…”
Lorrance pulls out magnum and points it at Warren’s forehead.
Lorrance: “You what?”
Warren mumbles uncontrollably and shuts his mouth.
Lorrance: “Don’t fucking say you don’t understand, or your brains are going to be on this motherfucking pavement. Now you nod your head in agreement and stop talking.”
Warren Nods head.
Lorrance puts the gun away.
Herb Walking down street
Warren: “Who the hell is that guy?”
Lorrance: “His name is Herb something, he does lawn work and extra favours for people who live around here. He also delivers the Newsweek paper.”
Warren: “Oh, that goofy looking bastard does all that? Well, I guess you have to shovel the shit hard when you don’t finish high school.”
Lorrance: “Exactly right man. He comes here to walk Kep. The only thing I can’t figure out is why the fuck he walks him for so long for only five dollars.”
Warren: “I don’t know man, but he’s fucking weird looking.”
Herb enters the driveway.
Fade To Black
**Herb Gets Annilhated**
Vincent Servago is talking to Lorrance in the driveway of his house, 5 minutes after Warren left.
Vincent's partner, Max Ward, is sitting in their car.
Lorrance: "Look, just take care of that fucker. He should't have fucked around with you boss like that anyway."
Vincent: "I know, I'm waiting for the call right now, me and Max need your help, you gotta come with us."
Lorrance: "Fine, you owe me one."
Herb is approaches them.
Lorrance: "I'm fucking busy Herb, Kep is in the house walk him, I'll be back late by the sounds of things."
Herb: "Al' Right"
They get in the car and drive off down the road.
Herb goes into the house to get Kep.
Max, Vincent, and Lorrance are driving out towards the empty part of town, near the lake.
Vincent's cell phone rings. After talking he looks at Max and nods.
Lorrance: "So where we going, what's the job?"
Vincent: "That was the man on the phone, he says he's arranged to pick up the clients about ten minutes up the road here. We have to make an example of them, they already had their second chance, now they have to pay.
Max turns on the Radio.
Radio announcer: "I just got this story from our reporter Jill Valentine, a house had been discovered in the woods behind the mental hospital on the east side of town. Four teenagers were kidnapped there and tortured and killed, the fourth one got away and informed authorities. The police raided the house and there was a massive standoff. Everyone in the house was killed. According to the police there was a child, a man dressed like a clown, a women, and a tall man with the phrase "Bloodclot: Blood is Forever" written on his shirt. The other inhabitant of the house was dead when they arrived. All Sheriff Mackenzie had to say when asked to comment was "I just hope we got them all."
Vincent turns the radio off.
Vincent: "Jesus christ Max, why do you listen to that fucking news channel. All they ever have from this shit hole town is bad news. That was a fucked up story. Bunch of inbred homicidal maniacs torturing innocent tennagers. This fucking town turns people out like that. Anyways, there they are."
In the distance they see two guys that look to be camping on the lake.
Max: "They don't know we are coming, they think they're going to hide out here and be picked up tommorow and flown to Colombia to escape us. But they don't know that our boss got to their ride before they did."
They come to a stop and get out their guns. They start driving towards the two guys.
They jump out of the car by their camp site.
The two guys try to get away but a shot in the knees by Max.
Max: "Hey boys, hows it going? You know who we work for right? You know what you've done right. You don't try to fuck our boss like you two did, especially when he gave you a second chance."
Vincent: "What are your fucking names?"
First man: "My name is Dean, and this is Ron.
Max: "Lorrance, get me the fast drying cement and the recycling bin out of the trunk of the car."
Vincent: "Now, I would like to know which one of you had the most part in this shit. I know that one of you just gave the other one aid in his plan. I'll give you guys one chance to tell the truth, and don't think by lying to me that you'll be getting off easy."
Ron: "I'll tell the truth!"
Dean: "No, you prick! Don't listen to him its all lies!"
Ron: "It was this motherfucker, It was his idea to try and screw your boss, and I helped him... I'm sorry!"
Max: "I bet you are motherfucker! I was given orders to take care of the mastermind, and make a walking example of the helper. Thanks to the boss,, prior to coming here I knew each role you two played."
Lorrance puts the bag of cement and the recycling bin on the ground.
Max points his gun at Dean.
Max: "I'm about to take care of the guilty one."
Vincent: "Do it Max.
Max turns and shoots Ron in the shoulder.
Max: "Motherfucker Ron thought he was getting off easy on this shit, well Ron, YOU'RE FUCKED.
Vincent grabs him and knocks him out with the end of his pistol. Vincent thens puts concret in the recycling bin and gets water from the lake. With Max's help, they put Ron's feet in the bin and while it's hardening, they approach Dean.
Lorrance: "Looks like your the living example, to bad you won't be awake to watch your friend die.
Max grabs three clubs, and Vincent throws a sheet over Dean. They fuck him up good with the clubs. They wrap him up in the sheet and throw him in the tall grass.
They wait 20 minutes and then Lorrance goes and starts up Dean and Ron's boat while Vincent and Max put Ron in the boat. They splash cold water on Ron to wake him up.
Ron: "What the fuck are you doing."
Vincent: "Making sure your not found bitch, ever heard of the cement shoes?"
Max: "You about to learn all about the motherfucker."
Lorrance: "Heres the deepest part of the lake."
Vincent: "Any last words motherfucker?"
Ron: "Yeah, tell your boss that his wife gives a good blow job and I fucked her 6 times!"
Max: "Well, we'll ask her about that, and if its true, then we'll kill your entire family. So long."
Vincent and Max pick Ron up and throw him overboard. He sinks like a rock.
Vincent: "I'm glad these motherfuckers get what they deserve."
Lorrance looks at the lake in the dark dusk
Lorrance: "Yeah, they all drown in blackened waters."
Fade to Black
Max, Vincent, and Lorrance are approaching Lorrance's house to drop him off.
Lorrance gets out of the car.
Max: "Thanks for the help Lorrance."
Lorrance: "Your welcome, and remember you owe me one."
The car pulls out of the drive way and leaves.
Lorrance wonders what time it is, he was back a lot earlier than he had thought he would be.
He walks inside but sees Kep nowhere.
Lorrance: "That fucker Herb, I'm going right now to look for him!"
Lorrance puts his magnum and cell phone inside his coat and walks out the door.
Lorrance: "Theres no fucking way he can walk that dog for three hours, I'm going to his fucking house right now and getting to the bottom of this."
Lorrance walks, ten minutes later he is outside Herb's one room apartment.
He listens and hears Herb making weird noises and saying "Uggggh you like that Kep, Do ya." and Kep yelping kicks the door in.
He witnesses Herb with his pants down trying to catch Kep.
Herb sees Lorrance. Herb tries to run away and Kep squeals and runs to Lorrance.
Lorrance shoots Herb in the knee cap. He gets out his cell phone.
Dialing...
Max: "Hello."
Lorrance: "Where are you guys, I need your help. Come to 1254 Queen street west, its a shitty apartment. Bring a blanket, chainsaw, and a shotgun, with a wide spread..
Max: "20 gauge it is, we're on the way."
Lorrance guards Herb.
10 minutes later Max and Vincent approach the apartment, with Vincent carrying everything.
Lorrance: "This fucker was raping my dog, He's gonna pay!"
Lorrance cocks shotgun and shoots Herb in the groin.
Lorrance wraps Kep up in the blanket.
Lorrance: "Max, can you talk Kep out to the car. Vincent fire up the chainsaw! HEY HERB! YOU EVER SEEN SCARFACE FUCKER!"
Lorrance and Vincent cut Herbs legs and arms slowly, one by one. Lorrance spits on Herb, pulls his magnum out of his coat and puts it to Herb's forehead.
Lorrance: "I'm going to plaster your fucking walls with your grease paint motherfucker!"
Lorrance pulls the trigger and blood goes everywhere.
Vincent: "Lets get the fuck out of here, the cops will be coming any minute."
Lorrance: "Lets roll..."
Lorrance and Vincent walk out the door and close it behind them.
THE END
written by: Ryan
7/28/2003 6:57:23 PM
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