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    The "raptors in the kitchen" scene in JP was filmed on Joseph Mazzello's birthday. During one take, Joe ran into one of the raptors and was injured. (From: 'jurassiraptor')
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    Armageddon:Dan's JP3 Page 2-Chapter 16 - The Conclusion
    By Spinoboy11



    Chapter 16-Final Showdown

    All ten of them emerged in the command center. A horrid sight met their eyes. All of Group Two were either tied up or on their knees with guns at their heads. TREX…rage!! and MegalodonLives! were both there as well. SGD had a gun to Acro’s head, J7 was aiming at Dino_Dude, KillerRaptor held his up to Yvonne, and so on. All of the Veterans looked beaten. Cyros spoke first.

    Cyros: Acro, what happened?

    AcroIguana: Sorry, guys. They caught us in the lighthouses. We’ve disarmed the rooftop one, and the ones in each lighthouse, but we can’t find the rest.

    SGD smirked.

    SGD: Now, what’s your story? Tell me, or your friends get it.

    Jurassiclaw sighed.

    Jurassiclaw: We got 16 in the infirmary, but there’s still one left.

    SGD’s grin grew wider.

    SGD: Great! Now secure them.

    Several flooders walked over and aimed sidearms at them. RiverWorld took Dan, DreamerGirl tossed down Vader, Thade aimed at Evilgrinch, General Rancor grabbed Spinoboy11, Panos stuck his gun in JJ’s back, Veloci_Josh took aim at Jurassiclaw, Martyr Machine booted Cyros, PolarShore snatched the guns from the girls and aimed, and RaptorVinny stuck his gun to Dac’s head. Then, Dac remembered something, and a sudden idea struck him.

    Dac: Hey, SGD, did you ever find out who stole the money?

    SGD’s jaw dropped.

    SGD: What? How do you…

    Dac: I know who did it.

    SGD looked at him, with a suspicious look on his face.

    SGD: And who do you think did it?

    Dac remained calm.

    Dac: Oh, just RaptorVinny and DreamerGirl. That’s why they were making love on the tower a few hours ago; they were pleased with their efforts.

    Everyone whirled and looked at those two. The Veterans all attempted to keep straight faces, as though the story was not new to them. SGD narrowed his eyes.

    SGD: So…it was you.

    RaptorVinny: I swear it wasn’t! I don’t know anything about that! I swear!

    DreamerGirl: Yeah, we only made love because…

    She halted, and RaptorVinny looked furious. Grins spread over the faces of Veterans and Alliance members alike, except SGD and the two in question.

    SGD: That would be why you didn’t see this lot crawling around! You were too busy with your social life! We have a mission and you have flouted your responsibility! And you stole my money!

    Suddenly, KillerRaptor spun.

    KillerRaptor: WHAT?!! YOUR money?! That money was for all of us, and you say for YOU! So that’s it! If he hadn’t stolen it, you would have yourself! I’ll bet you would have shot us down when the survivors arrived at your condo, so you could keep the money! IT WAS YOU! OK, this is over NOW!

    SGD: SILENCE! I will not tolerate mutiny! Join the Veterans, then, KillerRaptor, and you two, because I don’t want insubordination!

    Then an unexpected person voiced his own opinion of the argument.

    Evilgrinch: Insubordination? I see it all, now! You planned to use your members to get money, and destroy a city! And I thought you could sink no lower!

    Suddenly, KillerRaptor, DreamerGirl and RaptorVinny released the people they were holding, and tossed them some weapons. Quickly, all guns were raised. RaptorVinny turned to Dac.

    RaptorVinny: Dac, secure SGD. I’m relieving you of command.

    SGD: My ass.

    RaptorVinny: Fine. Hold up, Captain. I’ll do it myself.

    He walked boldly up to his commander and aimed his gun at SGD’s chest. SGD did likewise. Everyone else looked bewildered. SGD spoke up.

    SGD: KillerRaptor, DreamerGirl, you’re either with the Allience or against it.

    DreamerGirl sighed.

    DreamerGirl: It has been the greatest honor of my life to serve you, sir. But like Killer said, it’s over.

    She extended her gun and aimed at RaptorVinny’s head. Then she whirled and shot PolarShore. He collapsed to the ground with a hole in his head. Martyr Machine aimed up and shot DreamerGirl in the face, and she dropped like a stone. SGD unloaded a clip into RaptorVinny as a firefight ensued. RaptorVinny fell limply to his knees. Evilgrinch snatched up another gun and fired. SGD turned and ran from the room. J7 and Thade fired a few more blind shots before following.

    SGD: J7, Thade! Get to the rocket! I’ll try to cover you!

    Dac shot down Panos, Jurassic Justin blew a hole in General Rancor, Evilgrinch fired a shot into RiverWorld, and so forth. Many Alliance members and Veterans went down. Spinoboy11 managed to shoot down Cock Knocker. Dinosoor threw a knife, which clattered next to Dark Hunter, who snatched it up, and sneaked up behind Dinosoor by then stabbing him in the back. Evilgrinch saw KillerRaptor lying on the ground, and yelled.

    Evilgrinch: Vader, Spinoboy11!

    The three dragged the wounded former Alliance member out the door.

    Vader: KillerRaptor!

    KillerRaptor: My god, what have I done? I helped that abomination!

    Spinoboy11: Where’s the missile? Where’s the last missile?

    KillerRaptor looked at him blankly.

    KillerRaptor: Armory.

    Spinoboy11: Dac, JJ, Acro! The armory! GO!

    The three he called turned and ran, Dac in the lead, as KillerRaptor sagged to the ground, drenched in blood. Spinoboy11 pulled out a grenade he had swiped from the infirmary.

    Spinoboy11: GUYS! GET OUT, NOW!

    All of the Veterans ran, and dragged out their bound comrades. The Alliance stood baffled, until one door was sealed, and Spinoboy11 tossed in the grenade, and then sealed the door he was behind

    Various Alliance members: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRGGH!!!

    The explosion echoed throughout the fort. The shock wave blew Spinoboy11 off the door, but luckily, the door itself held.

    Spinoboy11: Come on! There's still three of them!

    Everyone turned tail and ran.

    MEANWHILE…

    J7 and General Thade mounted the missile in the armory, and set the coordinates for the Fairmont Hotel. That would be enough. Just as they were finishing coordinates, an explosion rocked the island. They looked out a window and saw the one window of the room where they had been in a firefight minutes before explode outwards. They caught a glimpse of Evil Inside going flying from the window, cut, bleeding and on fire before he fell on a flag pole, completely impaled. They spent more minutes setting it up and making sure no screws were loose when suddenly the door exploded inwards, wood flying everywhere. J7 fell out of the window, and landed two floors below. He was still alive, but suffered three broken fingers in the fall. Thade managed to duck, and when he looked up, Jurassic Justin, Dac and AcroIguana were all looking at him. Dac’s enormous gun was smoking. Thade raised his sidearm, but before he could aim, Acro shot him in the brain. He collapsed immediately.

    Dac: Hurry up and disarm it. I’ll try to find SGD.

    He ran out and went to find the main flooder just as the sun rose. It had been a long night, that was for sure. Jurassic Justin stood guard, when suddenly J7 ran in.

    J7: You! Oh, you two are dead now!!!

    AcroIguana raised the gas.

    AcroIguana: Shoot either of us and I’ll break this, and kill all of us!

    J7: You bastards!

    All three edged around the room before Jurassic Justin looked at where J7 was standing, and at the control panel.

    Jurassic Justin: You know, I’ve always like fighting fire with fire!

    He hit the launch button, and J7 was impaled through the gut. He was launched out over the bay, and when he was halfway across, Jurassic Justin hit the detonation button. The missile exploded.

    Jurassic Justin: That’s that. Who’s left?

    AcroIguana: SGD, and if I’m not mistaken, Evilgrinch will be the one to take care of him.

    JJ: Right. I’ll call everyone.

    He scanned all radio and walkie talkie frequencies.

    JJ: Guys, SGD is the only one left. Someone find him, take care of him, and then we’ll get to the jet that brought us here and get out.

    MEANWHILE…

    Evilgrinch, Vader and Spinoboy11 were opening cell doors, letting out the rest of Group One. Suddenly, the radio crackled, and JJ’s message came through. Evilgrinch looked at the other Veterans.

    Evilgrinch: He’s mine. You others, get to the jet.

    Vader: Grinch, what if you don’t make it?

    Evilgrinch: Don’t worry about me.

    And with that, he turned and ran. Everyone stared, dumbfounded, after him. The Spinoboy11 jerked.

    Spinoboy11: Come on, LET’S GO!

    They ran for the courtyard.

    MEANWHILE…

    SGD ran through the fortress. He, too, had seen Evil Inside get impaled, and J7 explode, and was running, trying to hide. He had also heard JJ’s message on his walkie talkie, and for all he knew, half of the Veterans would be swooping down on him. Suddenly, as he ran, he heard a familiar voice behind him.

    Evilgrinch: It’s me and you, pal!

    SGD kept running, when he saw a turn on his left. He took the turn and ran through a doorway and pressed against the wall. Evilgrinch turned the corner, saw no one, and ducked into the room. He looked around, saw a large box nearby, and walked around it. SGD lunged.

    SGD: AAAAAAHH!!

    He slammed Evilgrinch into the wall and smashed him in the face. Evilgrinch retaliated with a foot in his enemy’s gut. SGD fell back, and Evilgrinch dived on him. SGD rolled, so Evilgrinch was beneath him, and he started delivering more blows to the face before reaching down and grabbing Evilgrinch with both hands around the neck.

    SGD: I’m gonna choke it outta you! My plan failed, but I swear I will get my own back at you!

    Evilgrinch was losing air slowly. As he was about three minutes away from passing out, he remembered something someone had said a few days ago.

    Dac (in Evilgrinch’s memory): Inhalation poison gas. Paralyzes and cuts off nerves after 35 seconds. Dissolves the skeleton, causes dropping out and melting of eyeballs, cause of spasms so hard they rip your torso clean off. Then it’s just a matter of whether you vomit all your guts out or just some. Skin vaporizes after that.

    Slowly, Evilgrinch reached into his pocket and brought something out. He pressed a button, and what appeared to be a needle shot out. SGD didn’t notice. The familiar grin was spreading over his face, when suddenly he felt an excruciating pain in his side. His head snapped down and stared at the syringe. Evilgrinch injected and grinned.

    Evilgrinch: Chew on that, you son of a bitch!

    He rolled away as the effects started occurring. It was exactly how Dac had described it, but Evilgrinch had his mind on more important things. He just realized he didn’t have the antidote! He started coughing as he inhaled it…

    Voice: Grinch!

    He looked up. Dac was standing on a balcony, too high up to feel the effects of the gas.

    Dac: Catch

    He tossed down something small. It was the antidote syringe. Evilgrinch caught it, extended the needle…but he couldn’t inject something that huge…

    Evilgrinch (groaning): Uh............

    He had stuck it in and injected it. He rolled over, and lay unconscious.

    MEANWHILE…

    A few minutes later, Dac ran into the yard, followed by the stragglers.

    Dac: Grinch got him. He upheld his part of the vendetta.

    Vader: Great. Now, let’s wait for him, and we can go.

    Suddenly, Dac went pale.

    Dac: Wait…oh shit!

    Jurassiclaw: What? What is it?

    Dac: He used my poison gas, and injected the antidote into himself! I just remembered, all the people who tested the antidote went unconscious! He’s out cold! And the Guard…

    He explained what Grinch had said to the Guard member at the airport.

    Charlotte: Oh my God!

    Dac: I’m going back in. I’m getting him out!

    Vader: Dac, no!

    Dac: It’s because of me he’s out! I’m getting him out or I’ll die trying!

    And before anyone could stop him, he turned and ran back in. Everyone stared, before Spinoboy11 yelled out to his Australian friend.

    Spinoboy11: Good luck, Dac! Stay sharp!

    MEANWHILE…

    Evilgrinch awoke, sweating in the hold of the fortress. He looked to his left and saw a few puddles of blood, mucus and other foul liquids: all that was left of his enemy. He groaned and climbed to his feet, before remembering what he had said the day before.

    Memory: We will try to signal with flare guns in 24 hours. If we don’t, we want planes to bomb that island with napalm to consume the gas and render it useless. We will lose our lives, but we have no choice, because we want to minimize the casualties.

    Quickly, he dragged himself out of the doorway nearby, onto a balcony which overlooked the island. Already, he could see five black shapes in the distance, and he knew what they were, and raised the flare guns.

    MEANWHILE…

    The five bombers flew low towards the fortress. The lead one got ready to press the bomb button.

    Pilot 1: Prepare to bomb.

    Suddenly, another pilot spoke up.

    Pilot 2: Hey, what are those?

    HQ: What are what?

    Pilot 2: Oh, god…blue smoke! I got blue flares! HQ, HQ! BLUE FLARES!

    HQ: ABORT!

    Quickly, four bombers peeled off, but in a panic, the leader accidentally hit the bomb button.

    Pilot 1: OH, GOD! I ACCIDENTALLY DROPPED IT!

    Evilgrinch: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    The explosion hit the back of the island, and Evilgrinch went flying through the air. The jet was untouched, but they saw their friend go soaring into the atmosphere.

    Vader: Evilgrinch!!! Wait!!!

    Spinoboy11: God damn it!

    Charlotte: Evilgrinch!!! No!!!!!! Please don't leave me......

    She sagged in her seat, sobbing. Everyone lost view of Evilgrinch as he went and landed in the water.

    MEANWHILE…

    He was enveloped in coldness, a single stinging slap. He sank, motionless, towards the bottom, thinking.

    Evilgrinch (thinking): Hey, it isn’t so bad. It’s better than being hot.

    He lost consciousness again, when suddenly, something grabbed him and dragged him back towards the island. The next thing he knew, he spat water out and sat up. He was sitting on concrete, near the bay.

    Evilgrinch: What the…how’d I get here?

    Voice: Lucky I came back, huh?

    He spun. Dac was standing, grinning, behind him.

    Dac: Feeling better?

    Evilgrinch: I owe you two, now.

    Dac: Don’t sweat it. I didn’t want your fiancé growing up without a husband.

    Evilgrinch: How is she?

    Dac: A lot of us are safe back at the jet, her included. The ones who were killed along the way are the only missing.

    Suddenly, the crackle of static nearby made them both jump. A walkie talkie lay on the ground.

    Vader (through radio): Dac, do you read me? Come in!

    Evilgrinch: It’s for you.

    He tossed it up to him.

    Dac: This is Dac.

    Vader: Get back here. We need to leave.

    Dac: I know.

    Vader: How can you sound so calm?! Evilgrinch just died, didn’t you see?!

    Dac grinned, didn’t say a thing, and tossed it to Evilgrinch.

    MEANWHILE…

    Vader: Dac, did you get that? I said he DIED!

    Suddenly, another voice came through, but it wasn’t Dac.

    Voice: Die, did I?

    Charlotte looked up. Everyone else froze.

    Vader: Grinch?

    Evilgrinch: It’s me. We’re both alive and well.

    All around the courtyard, cheers erupted. Spinoboy11 took the radio.

    Spinoboy11: Guys, it’s Spinoboy. What about SGD?

    Evilgrinch: He’s dead.

    Spinoboy11: The poison worked?

    Evilgrinch: Yeah. Now tell them to wait for us, we’re coming up.

    Charlotte ran over to Evilgrinch and hugged him tightly.

    Evilgrinch: Thanks, tough girl. Heh heh heh heh.

    Charlotte: Your welcome, tough boy.

    Charlotte giggled as Evilgrinch kissed her on the forehead. Just as the Veterans thought it was over, a thud was heard on the wing of the jet. Everyone looked out the window right after the eruption occured...and there, to Evilgrinch, Spinoboy11, and everyone else's amazement...was Destroyer. The mutant had somehow managed to survive Dac's attack, and also have managed to stay on a 300 m.p.h. jet.

    Dan: Holy shit!

    TREX...rage!!: Dac! I thought you killed that motherfucker!

    Dac: I did!

    MegLives!: Are you sure!

    Dac: Positive!

    Dark Hunter: Well, it looks like you screwed up again, dirtbag!

    Destroyer yelled in fury as it started punching the wing of the jet. Spinoboy11 snapped his fingers as an idea came to his mind.

    Spinoboy11: Pilot, slow down!

    Pilot #1: We can't do that, sir!

    Spinoboy11: Just do it!

    Pilot #2: But...

    Spinoboy11: NOW!

    Pilot #1: Yes, sir.

    In a few seconds, the plane went down from 300 m.p.h. to only 70.

    Spinoboy11: Dino_Dude, give me your M-16!

    Dino_Dude: You got it!

    Spinoboy11: I'm tired of this shit!

    Vader: Wait, where the hell are you going?!

    Spinoboy11: I'm going to blow away the son of a bitch.

    Spinoboy11 preceded his rate of climb up the ladder that lead to an emergency exit outside on top of the fuselage. The others watched from inside the jet in terror and hope as they heard gunfire from above. They saw Destroyer being pushed back by the heavy gunfire. They could see what Spinoboy11 was doing. He was trying to knock Destroyer off the plane. The gunfire continued for over a half a minute until it fell silent. Spinoboy11's ammo was gone, and he was now defenseless. In one final attempt to save his friends, Spinoboy11 threw the M-16 at Destroyer and dropkicked the beast in the chest. Destroyer barely even budged in inch. Destroyer took its drill and prepared to drive it into Spinoboy11's chest.

    Destroyer: AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Spinoboy11 smiled and dodged out of the way quickly. He opened up the emergency exit and hopped into the fuselage. He was tired as he collapsed to the floor and fell into shock.

    Dac: Move, God damn it!

    KillerRaptor: GO!!!

    Pilot #1: Yes, sir! Hang on!

    The pilots pulled down the gears as far as they could go. Outside, the pressure was too much for Destroyer. The mutant lost its grip as its body flew down 1,000 feet below outside San Fransisco, landing on the middle of suburban street. Destroyer's reign of destruction has finally ended.

    Inside of the fuselage, everyone applauded for everybody else for a job well done.

    Evilgrinch: Good work, guys!

    Spinoboy11: Great job, everyone.

    Thanks to the Veterans...San Fransisco was saved, SGD and his Allience are gone for good, and the hideous monster Destroyer has been banished...forever. Now Evilgrinch and Charlotte could start a life and a family together...Dan and Julia could have a well-needed vacation...Spinoboy11 could just chill out with TREX...rage!!, Dac, Dark Hunter, and other members...and Vader could finally get a life...

    The war is over.......but a new adventure awaits...

    DIRECTED BY SPINOBOY11

    PRODUCED BY SCARLET SPIDER

    WRITTEN BY SPINOBOY11 AND DAC

    MUSIC BY JURASSIC JUSTIN

    LOGO CREATED BY TREX...RAGE!!

    STORY IDEAS BY ACROIGUANA

    EXECUTIVE PRODUCER-CARNOTAUR3

    EDITED BY REX DEFENDER

    EVILGRINCH

    SPINOBOY11

    VADER

    DAC

    DARK HUNTER

    TREX...RAGE!!

    DAN

    MEGALODONLIVES!

    KILLERRAPTOR

    ACROIGUANA

    CYROS

    RAPTOR-REX

    JURASSIC JUSTIN

    RAPTORVINNY

    DREAMERGIRL

    POLARSHORE

    J7

    GENERAL RANCOR

    RIVERWORLD

    JURASSICLAW

    MIKEYMIKE

    GENERAL THADE

    MARTYR MACHINE

    DINOSOOR

    COCK KNOCKER

    JULIA

    CHARLOTTE

    SGD

    SPINOBOY11 PRODUCTIONS PRESENTS

    A SCARLET SPIDER PRODUCTION

    A SPINOBOY11 FILM

    ARMAGEDDON: DAN'S JP3 PAGE 2





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