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Dark Force Destructor: Chapter One
By Dac
Hey, everyone
This is my first completed work. I released it on Dan's as per I could never finish a fic. :Shudders: They were bad times. So I finally cracked down and burned to it, and got working on Dark Force Destructor, a DBZ-style story involving the Internet and the users there. Now, there are a lot of differences to average DBZ stuff, so here they are.
First up, the computer system: every site has at least one computer console which they must program if they want to travel to a different site. No planes or spaceships can get them there
Next, the races. The two sentient species are humans, which are divided between Users and Banished Flooders (who we all know and love). The other group are the Marjinners, pure evil beings like humans except they have extreme strength and powers. The Marjinners disappeared for a long time, but all humans knew they had survived. They were always cautious, but now...well, I don't want to spoil it, so I'll get on with it.
The first chapter gives a sort of slow start to the story, but it introduces our four main good guys: Seth Rex, Evilgrinch, Vader, and of course, Icebreaker. Their little conversation will tell you what's going on, now enjoy!
DARK FORCE DESTRUCTOR
Chapter One
Icebreaker was worried. There was tension on the Internet. A new webpage had been opened, made by an unknown individual called the Dark Force Destructor. There was something wrong with the site...
Ice needed help from his longtime friends, Vader, Evilgrinch, Seth Rex and Dan. He had set up a base in the old abandoned Dragonball Z site, and was meeting his four allies there.
Little did he know that the Dark Force Destructor had allies, too, one of which was currently watching his every move...
13 November, 2001
Abandoned Dragonball Z website
11.55.03 p.m.
Icebreaker waited by the controls for the links in the old abandoned Dragonball Z site. He sat by the computer when a beeping noise came through. He checked the message: INCOMING FROM DAN'S JP3 PAGE
“Finally! What took them so long?" he sighed. The printing device whirred, and three glowing, aurora, shapeless lights came out and landed on the floor next to a Cell poster. Slowly, they emerged into the shapes of humans.
"Hey, Vader, Seth, Grinch," he said, nodding curtly. But something was wrong. The three looked pale.
"Something wrong, guys?"
Seth looked at Grinch. Grinch looked at Vader. Vader looked at the ground.
"It's about Dan, Jurassiclaw, Cyros, Dilo-Dude and all our other friends."
"What about them?"
"The Dark Force Destructor's troops. They've stormed the Internet. Dan's JP3 Page, MSN.com, Madblast, Astrodragon, and also heaps of other sites. Rampaged, taken over, and Astrodragon got destroyed completely. Dan, JC, Cyros and DD. They were taken, and Seth says he saw Captain Dac and Major Sharkey all over the place. More people, like SeanArcher, raptor00 and Caster Troy, were killed outright, and everyone else got arrested. The DFD has stolen or destroyed half the Internet. It's rumored that there are street gangs fighting for their lives on some lower pages, like the Animorphs page, but if you want the other guys back, we have to go to Madblast. Seth says he heard a Sergeant say to head back there. We need the DFD dead, or our friends will be enslaved or executed."
Ice stood, staring. Would he go or not? It looked like the fate of the Internet was in his hands. So was the fate of his friends. Should he? Shouldn't he?
He made up his mind...
2/15/2003 5:39:46 AM
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