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    Michael Crichton's JP novel originally began life as a movie screenplay in 1981, a story by Crichton about a dinosaur park written from a child's perspective. (From: Eddie)
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    Biosyn's Creation- PART 3
    By Carnotaur3

    EXT. STEGOSAUR PADDOCK – DAY

    The jungle swayed as the medical doctor, Dr. Darry Juttson, crossed the lying stegosaurs path. The steg lay, its breathing going steadily after Harold Hoskin and his assistant Philip Heartman.

    They watched close by as the medic bent down at the resting steg.

    JUTTSON
    Heart rate’s normal. Blood pressure about normal. A little high, but as high as usual. Everything seems fine.

    HOSKIN
    Jerry says it’s been sleeping most of the time. She’s always left behind when the rest of the herd moves out.

    JUTTSON
    Hmmm…

    Dr. Juttson shown a light in the eyes. By now, the eyes were getting really drowsy.

    JUTTSON
    Sleep deprivation.

    HOSKIN
    You know why, doctor?

    JUTTSON
    Not a clue, yet. Maybe later.

    Juttson bent down again, and with a needle in his hand, he pricked the scaly skin of the Stego.

    JUTTSON (cont’d)
    I’ll have to take a sample of this blood just to make sure it’s anything else.

    HOSKIN
    We’ll watch her over the night, just to be safe. Don’t want her roaming around at night, doing anything we don’t want her to do.

    Hoskin’s walkie-talkie buzzed in his hand as he heard a voice come to his ear.

    DODGSON (V.O.)
    Anything up?

    HOSKIN
    Our Steg is doing fine. Dr. Juttson might think it’s just sleep deprived. But she’ll be fine.

    PHILIP
    Can’t I just go and get something to eat right now? I’m starving!

    Dodgson started to talk again.

    DODGSON (V.O.)
    Well, are you staying the night.

    HOSKIN
    We are.

    DODGSON (V.O.
    Good. Tell your friend he’s welcome to go to dinner tonight. I got things to discuss with him.

    Philip, all of a sudden, didn’t feel so well.

    HOSKIN
    I guess you don’t want to go eat now!

    Hoskin laughed out loud. The dinosaur raised her head from the ground when she heard it, then, slightly dropped it back down.

    INT. RAPTOR ROOM – AFTERNOON TURNING EVENING

    Troy sat down in his chair, throwing pencils at the ceiling. So far, he had about 13 stuck up in there. All of which would probably fall to stab him in the head.

    TROY
    It looks like they are planning something.

    Norman was checking out all four cameras. The Raptors did seem to be planning something. But was it something bad?

    One of the raptors nudged the other. It started softly, then, harder.

    NORMAN
    Kiss my ass! If I didn’t know any better, I think he or is trying to wake up his mate!

    The female raised her head in response and got up with her mate.

    NORMAN (cont’d)
    Well, I’m going to get some coffee. We’re gonna be here all night.

    TROY
    No dinner?

    NORMAN
    Not for me.

    He walked out of the room in a flash. Troy went on throwing pencils.

    He decided to stop for a while and relaxed in the chair with his head back.

    He closed his eyes, thinking of good thoughts.

    A rustling woke him from his dream like state. He looked to see camera 1 go out.

    He jumped out of the chair quickly, just in time to see a velociraptor take out camera 3.

    Moments later the other two screens went into static form.

    Troy looked up to see the alpha female raptor look straight at him, through the plastic glass.

    Troy’s mouth opened as the raptor snarled and then, ran at the window, knocking it out as easily as cutting through a tomato.

    He fell to the floor, dumbfounded. His heart racing when he looked to the see the female carnivore’s face only inches from his. The raptor snarled again and left the roof in seconds.

    Troy sat, just about to piss his pants.

    INT. HALLWAY – BRIGHT

    Norman walked with two cups of coffee in his cup holder, when suddenly, a raptor ran n the hall. Her eyes set on Norman. He jumped out of the way, coffee flying all over the place, burning him and the raptor. But the raptor kept running.

    NORMAN
    SHIT!

    Norman went to the alarm and pulled it. Immediately the beep echoed through the halls and outside the building.

    CUT TO:

    The raptor room’s window was closing with a steel door. The other raptors, fortunately, didn’t make it out.

    Troy was still on the ground. He had to go and help get the raptor back in.

    Second’s latter, he found himself running in the hall.

    He found Norman, still saying “SHIT”.

    TROY
    Come on Norm!

    INT. HALLWAY – EVENING.

    The raptor ran through the halls, the Biosyn employees jolting to the side of the walls as she passed by.

    The raptor didn’t stop. It had one objective, and one objective only!

    “ESCAPE”

    She ran down the steps, skipping a lot of them in the process.


    INT. DINNER – NIGHT

    The beeping rang through the dinning room. Dodgson knew what happened.

    DODGSON
    GET YOUR GUNS.

    INT. BIOSYN LOBBY – BRIGHT

    The raptor passed by the computers and security guards, taking down one in the process.

    HERREEEE!!!!

    The carnivore was not going to give up without a fight. After it had kicked one of the guards with it’s killing sickle, Philip came in with his tranq gun and fired.

    The dart wizzed right at the neck of the raptor sending it to fall right SMACK on the ground.

    PHILIP
    Gotcha MOTHER!

    The raptors eyes rolled back in her head, slowly but promising.

    Dodgson joined in with Philip. Down the hall came Norman and Troy. Out from the doors came the medic, Dr. Juttson.

    JUTTSON
    She all right?

    PHILIP
    She’s fine.

    Juttson bent down over her, checking her pulse.

    DODGSON
    (To Troy and Norman) What happened?

    TROY
    She ran the plastic glass. She actually broke through it!

    DODGSON
    I’ll order someone to get more strong plastic glass.

    TROY
    Bullet proof is more like it!

    DODGSON
    (To Philip) You gave the right amount dosage, right?


    PHILP
    I thought it was already in the dart!

    CUT TO:

    Raptor’s right eye opened looking up.

    CUT TO:

    DODGSON
    You son of a…
    CUT TO:

    The raptor shove her foot right into Juttson’s stomach. Blood and guts spilled onto the cement floor like a river.

    The raptor got up and ran right out of the glass door, breaking it down.

    DODGSON (cont’d)
    WERE GONNA NEED BACK UP, NOW!




    1/18/02 10:22:48 PM

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