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<font color=Red>Good work! Once again, I felt a few places could use a bit more description. But overall, it was very good! I'm going to read the third one when it comes out.
<i>-Vader
Moderator and Writer of Dan's Page
<a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-SITE_WARS__Episode_IV_-_The_Dark_Veil.asp"><font color=White>The Dark Veil - REVISED INTO NOVEL with Author Interviews</i></a></font>
At 7:20:06 PM on 4/9/2002, nellyluvachika said:
this story sucks...please do not read... sorry for being so harsh but... the truth is the truth... sorry for the bruiser...
Readers do not read i state
"howl"!!! DUMB DUMB
At 7:16:06 PM on 4/9/2002, nellyluvachika said:
i dont know...this story is gory but another example of some story plot being repeated. HOWL... well i encourage that this is a story only to be read once. or else it spoils the thought. I can tell a lot of work went into this...keep working hard. but get better ideas.
At 7:29:00 PM on 4/3/2002, Parasaur.w said:
<font color=orange><center>Pete's Mini Review
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<font color=gray>Very intriguing plot. Good details. Good build up. Dialogue was too unidentifiable. At times, I wasn't sure who exactly was speaking. Some spelling an grammer errors. Lacked a little character developement, Garry and Jeff seemed to be a lot alike. I enjoyed this story. I look forward to the next chapter!
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7.6 of 10</font></center>
At 9:41:19 PM on 4/2/2002, raptorman69 said:
Excellent Wolf story. Probably the best one ever. :) Can't wait for the next part.
At 5:05:45 PM on 3/31/2002, westfilm said:
Excellent! I can't wait to read the third.
At 11:11:57 AM on 3/29/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Better than Howling movies! HEHE! I loved it!
4/4
At 2:15:39 PM on 3/27/2002, PunkNerd said:
yeah it was excellent, awesome first two installments eagerly waiting the final part
At 9:29:06 PM on 3/26/2002, DilophosaurGirl said:
Hmm...has that Resident Evil eeriness to it, only with werewolves. Keep up the good work I'll be awaiting the next chapter!
At 8:53:18 PM on 3/21/2002, Jet Raptor said:
this has been the best wolf story i have ever seen in my life time keep up the good work
At 8:23:53 PM on 3/21/2002, Dino-Snore said:
Wow ! This is good stuff !
At 10:28:44 AM on 3/20/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Creepy! Your descriptions give the reader disturbing mental visions. Very good! I can't wait for the final instalment!
At 11:42:36 PM on 3/15/2002, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skkyblue>CooL DeaL :) I liked it a lot and I will definetly read the last installment</font>
At 7:49:47 PM on 3/13/2002, Bastard101 said:
Bah!
At 7:40:22 PM on 3/13/2002, Seth Rex said:
very cool dude.
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