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<font color=Red>Very spooky and scary! I would reccomend a little more description in some places. That usually adds so much to a fic. But I'm off to read the next one now. Good job!
<i>-Vader
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<a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-SITE_WARS__Episode_IV_-_The_Dark_Veil.asp"><font color=White>The Dark Veil - REVISED INTO NOVEL with Author Interviews</i></a></font>
At 3:38:37 PM on 4/10/2002, nellyluvachika said:
Bye the way... GRAMMER is a must... and this story is a thriller to read but not original. better luck next time.
At 7:06:11 PM on 4/9/2002, nellyluvachika said:
this was ok....but have u seen american wearwolf in london...yeeea take a hint.
At 10:27:24 PM on 4/8/2002, Violater said:
Damnit! Jany, NOOOOO! Damn wolves. Damn them all to hell. Oh great story.
At 9:26:42 PM on 3/31/2002, Parasaur.w said:
Whoa, gory! Yay!
At 9:24:40 PM on 3/27/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
cool:
A lot of people are dying...quickly! LOL
Muwahhh!!
At 9:22:35 PM on 3/26/2002, DilophosaurGirl said:
First of all TobyCompy2.0 sorry for not reviewing this story sooner, secondly I just wanted to say that your story is good! This chapter was short but it has that evil horror feel to it. Keep up the good work!
At 8:51:23 PM on 3/21/2002, Jet Raptor said:
That was good old chap i'm on my way to part two
At 10:09:12 AM on 3/20/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Excellent! I'm going to read the second now. Very good read.
At 8:02:28 PM on 3/16/2002, raptorman69 said:
Nice
At 12:11:50 AM on 3/3/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Very scary, don't read this is the dar:) Good writing, keep it up
At 5:21:19 PM on 3/2/2002, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skkyblue>It was a little short...but thats not a big deal. I liked the overall style of writing that you presented here! I look forward to your sequel in to this particular story</font>
At 9:11:53 PM on 1/31/2002, aragorn_8 said:
Very good! please post more!
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