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means the user is online now! At 4:12:32 PM on 2/28/2003, The Crow said: Pretty good...
I'd like to see more...
Crow rating -- C+
At 1:25:22 PM on 2/28/2003, tobycompy2.0 said: Yeah, Vader its kind of half and half because in the comic Matt Murdock had been revealed as Daredevil. And I'm also using Bullseye's costume from the comic, not the movie.
At 1:14:31 AM on 2/28/2003, CeratosPit said: I look 4ward 2 reading more.
At 12:08:13 AM on 2/28/2003, Vader said: Well, it seems you're following the way the film went - starting in the middle of a scene, and then cutting away to earlier.
I like your decision to tell it from the first-person perspective.
It's a little choppy, but its only the beginning. I just recommend that you don't stick too closely to the film.
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