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Very funny (and Jimmy's dead!), and the action is well-done, though a few of the characters (Dark Hunter, Agent Compy, and Seth Rex) seemed a little too incompetent to be secret agents or supervillians. There were also several grammatical errors throughout. Still, on the whole, this was very well done. And thanks for giving me a British accent!
-Host
At 5:26:26 PM on 11/25/2002, mikeymike said:
great work
At 11:03:44 PM on 11/22/2002, dark hunter said:
im evil, bwahahahaha
this is great though, seriously, its fantastic.
easy reading, good action, fast flowing plots, good simple dialogue, and good characters, not to mention the jokes:
"he's going to Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets"
that was such a funny line, this is cool as.
~Dark Hunter
At 11:09:57 PM on 11/21/2002, RaptorVinny500 said:
Great second chapter, the action parts were great.
At 10:52:00 PM on 11/21/2002, Seth Rex said:
cool!!
At 8:44:26 PM on 11/21/2002, Dante said:
sweet!
At 3:00:02 PM on 11/21/2002, PunkNerd said:
dude i like this this series stuff is cool
At 2:15:40 PM on 11/21/2002, Ben said:
Whoo-Hoo!! Awesomeness to the extreme!
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