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great work
At 10:59:23 PM on 11/21/2002, RaptorVinny500 said:
Great beginning to the series toby, now I'm of to chapter 2 :)
At 1:19:55 AM on 11/17/2002, PunkNerd said:
hell yeah dude! im stoked i liked it.. and im a main charrie!
At 6:20:19 AM on 11/14/2002, dark hunter said:
nice show toby, if you ever want a bad guy im your man ;)
*shameless plug at getting in a fan fic* lol
but anyway, nice writing, short and to the point, not much charcter development, but im sure we'll see that appear as the series progresses, good work.
~Dark Hunter
At 4:15:31 PM on 11/12/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Why? Why? Why do I always die!!
Oh well, great chapter!
At 3:24:07 PM on 11/12/2002, n_gardner637 said:
I like it! It has a strange mixture of net life and a cop show! Er.. hehe :)
At 2:59:50 PM on 11/12/2002, Dante said:
Pretty damn good chapter, Toby. ;)
Dante Rating = B+
BTW, I'll make a logo for the fic if you want me to.
At 2:56:58 PM on 11/12/2002, Jester_P said:
Very nice Toby. As Ben said it was a little short but concluded quite well, and I look forward to reading the next chapter in, from this, might turn out to be a great series.
At 2:47:17 PM on 11/12/2002, Ben said:
Wow! Totally awesome.
A little on the short side, but then again, if it's going to connect into a big season, then it'll make more sense!!
And I'm a producer!! <a href=http://flooder_slayer.tripod.com/>Slayer [Online]</font> I'll make sure you get the "AMP" logo, as AMP(Administration Moderated Productions) created BTFS and Slayer...and are always welcoming any new series!
Welcome to the world of weekly fan-fic series, and good luck!
At 2:27:36 PM on 11/12/2002, Seth Rex said:
good job!!
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