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means the user is online now! At 10:28:24 PM on 7/2/2002, rex homie said: I'm Not a teenager!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At 3:52:50 PM on 7/2/2002, TyrannoRex112 said: If you can't spell as a teenager might as well go back to 2nd grade.
At 3:25:11 PM on 7/2/2002, rex homie said: I wrote the next chapter and when I posted it was a double of the first one.I don,t need to be some smat spelling teenager who is sooo cool.
At 3:15:58 PM on 7/2/2002, Powerhouse said: Well, Um, good try homie. The grammar and construction is horrible, spelling is way off, and it is too fast paced. But, I believe that it could have a decent JP feel to it if you do some heavy editing.
I will be awaiting the next chapter.
And, why did you post it twice?
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