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means the user is online now! At 9:49:48 PM on 4/2/2002, tobycompy2.0 said: <font color=Brick red>This a really good teaser, I hope the fan fic is good.</font> <font color=Brick red> -What You Just Witnessed Was The Bite Of The Compy</font> <font color=Skkyblue>28 Days Until The Following Evil Trilogy: Return To The Castle</font> <a href=http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/tobycompy2.0-The_Following_Evil_Trilogy__Wolf_Hunt.asp>The Following Evil Trilogy: Wolf Hunt</a>
At 8:51:40 PM on 4/2/2002, Parasaur.w said: <font color=Red><center>Pete's Mini-Review *****************************</center> <font color=gray>The events took place extremely rapidly. You don't build any scene up or let it down at all. Everything is short and to the point, very abrupt. I disliked the Comic-booky feel to it. (<font color=white><i>"We find Chris at his computer..."</i>). Interesting plot. Not too much character developement. In <i>serious</i> need of spell and grammer check. I found this short story to be enjoyable. <center>*************** 4.5 of 10</center>
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