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From what I read, great!
Chapters 8, 9 and 10 were all missing, though
At 11:13:37 PM on 1/2/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Awesome story raptorhunter22. The writing is pretty good, but there are some really weird things coming up in really weir places (EXAMPLE: Baselton™s) The format was good and it was a fun read.
* * * 1/2 / * * * * *
Great job!
At 7:21:50 PM on 1/2/2002, Lutz. said:
Icebreaker: I didn't do shit.
At 7:05:18 PM on 1/2/2002, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skyblue>Well, the format of the story was just a bit confusing...I think that may be due to Lutz's editing, though I am not sure. However, the overall story line was great and the action was fun and dark at the same time.
This is another good piece of writing from a another new author. I am loving how this year is turning out so far with the awesome writing</font>
At 7:00:31 PM on 1/2/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
raptorhunter, my buddy, you did a great job! Authors like me among others usually take it gradually on through. But you won't let us take a breath for one second! lol. The dialogue was average and the chapter lengths were short
****/***** it'll get higher
At 5:15:04 PM on 1/2/2002, raptorhunter22 said:
and if your done reading it and you were confused about those weird icon things, they come up in the email, Im not sure why.....But just try to ignore them.
At 5:14:17 PM on 1/2/2002, raptorhunter22 said:
Sorry, I thought you had quit on me.
At 5:00:38 PM on 1/2/2002, Lutz. said:
"***Thanks to LUTZ for a couple trailers, and editing half way and quiting."
That hurts.
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