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QUOTE: Riddle, SHUT THE FUCK UP. ::o::ffer constructive ::critism::, or ::dont:: say anything bad.
Spelling mistakes ::callore:: , and a bit on the short side. ::other:: ::then:: that, you'll get better as you go along. I started off very similar to this, now I'm getting my own novel published soon. My main hint is, don't ::ignor:: :: cronstructive:: ::critism::. ::its:: ::the:: most important thing. You can ::ignor::, however, idiot dumbasses like Riddler there.
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You're going to have a novel published soon, Aragorn? I bet the proofreaders just LOVE you.
There's your constructive criticism for the day.
At 5:21:23 PM on 9/28/2003, Illiteration said:
if this story is serious it needs work...but people don't usually start off as brilliant writers...(some never even become them...) but if you really do like to write...keep at it
At 2:51:19 PM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
thank you
At 2:47:10 PM on 9/28/2003, Aragorn said:
Just ban him, Rick. One miseplled word IS NOT the same as a story full of them you dumbass cocklicking fatherfucking pansy-ass momma's boy.
At 2:26:15 PM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
no its not
you cant spell for shit
At 2:23:29 PM on 9/28/2003, Rick Arnold said:
A simple typo is way more different then a page full of errors that one could easily pick up.
At 12:23:55 PM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
you need to grasp it to
At 12:11:32 PM on 9/28/2003, Rick Arnold said:
*expected...
At 12:10:42 PM on 9/28/2003, Rick Arnold said:
Fan Fics aren't an excuse to be a dumb shit. You're still expect to have a basic grasp of the English language.
At 11:44:54 AM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
f.y.i. i am in tenth grade and yes i can spell. remember this is fan fic
At 1:41:09 AM on 9/28/2003, light element said:
It's obvious your either young, or stupid. So, I'll just say, pay more attention in English class, and learn to write stories properly.
At 1:15:52 AM on 9/28/2003, Aragorn said:
Riddle, SHUT THE FUCK UP. offer constructive critism, or dont say anything bad.
Spelling mistakes callore, and a bit on the short side. other then that, you'll get better as you go along. I started off very similar to this, now I'm getting my own novel published soon. My main hint is, don't ignor cronstructive critism. its hte most important thing. You can ignor, however, idiot dumbasses like Riddler there.
At 12:24:44 AM on 9/28/2003, theriddler said:
yeah you are the only one who likes this
At 12:24:43 AM on 9/28/2003, theriddler said:
yeah you are the only one who likes this
At 12:22:08 AM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
oh my oh my well someone loves this stroy
At 12:20:53 AM on 9/28/2003, theriddler said:
its stupid thats what all of your last 5 stories are. STUPID
At 12:20:09 AM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
y man its funny
At 12:17:08 AM on 9/28/2003, theriddler said:
ok keep writing just PLEASE delete Star wars II birth of a gungan
At 12:13:00 AM on 9/28/2003, puma said:
never it is my destiny to write
At 12:08:27 AM on 9/28/2003, theriddler said:
retire from story writing puma and delete star wars III
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