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Thanks Martin
At 6:10:52 AM on 12/31/2004, MartinRandle said:
Glad this story is back on track! Some great moments really enjoyable.
M
At 9:13:00 PM on 12/30/2004, fordprefect said:
Thanks Aragorn!
At 10:21:25 PM on 12/29/2004, Aragorn said:
This was an awesome chapter. As Dac said, the Loser line was hilarious. Can't wait for thw next one!
At 2:43:52 PM on 12/27/2004, fordprefect said:
Thanks Stealthy!
Title is 'Mission Impossible' by the way.
At 9:54:18 AM on 12/27/2004, Stealth Raptor2 said:
Gotta agree with Dac. This was a very good chapter:)
At 7:31:26 AM on 12/27/2004, fordprefect said:
Thank you Dac! I also felt that it was better than the last...
Don't worry, the S-men have their finest hour in JP3 Chat during the battle next chapter - where you play an important part.
Thanks about Rick/Ben/SGD part, that bit was the easiest to write.
Good to have you as a reader.
At 2:50:58 AM on 12/27/2004, Dac said:
"A cheer came from the crowd and a lone shout of ‘Loser’ rang through the city"
That line is GOLD!
A very nice chapter, big improvement on the last. Not as much screentime for the Dragon as much, but oh well
The best bit was easily Rick/Ben/SGD. Lots of humour, well written, although the grammar left a bit to be desired. A very nice installment
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