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Thanks Marto...I'm aiming to make the next episode more like the earlier episodes.
Well, I have started writing Episode 14! No more jinxes.
At 3:58:35 PM on 11/27/2004, MartinRandle said:
It needs some let up in the pace FP me old mate! I love this series but this episode seemed too fast. It lacked the comedic timing of the earlier episodes.
This could be because:
You were slightly pressurised to deliver an episode.
You were suffering writers block.
It is episode THIRTEEN!
:-)
At 8:00:08 AM on 11/26/2004, fordprefect said:
Martin - What do you mean pace it a little more naturally?
I could edit it.
Thanks guys for your comments.
At 10:29:03 PM on 11/25/2004, Dac said:
"Witness the wonders of an ancient glory!"
Touche; though it seemed a bit of a blunt dragon intro. Nice to see you took my suggestion in hand - the Dragonheart parodies begin, for I am Sean Connery!
Very nice, very interesting, albeit fast-paced. The Aragorn/Junkee thing was a bit twisted, however I enjoyed the JP ModRaptor thing
At 7:11:29 PM on 11/25/2004, MartinRandle said:
see look - I am typing so fast I botched that whole comment!
At 7:10:39 PM on 11/25/2004, MartinRandle said:
You'r enot kidding I felt like I was speed reading!
I was only kidding when I said get on with writing the next chapter - I'd rather you'd paced it a little mor enaturally. Maybe you could edit it a little.
Some funny moments and great spoofingas always! Nice to see a few different ones from the usual JP LOTR SW MAtrix fare, 9they think it's all over - IT IS NOW!!! - roflmao.
At 6:34:58 PM on 11/25/2004, fordprefect said:
Man! This feels RUSHED. I don't know why, but the whole chapter seems like an auxilary chapter ( a middle chapter). Kind of like Two Towers but without the grandeur.
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