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By 'homour', I mean 'humour'!
At 11:09:01 AM on 9/27/2004, fordprefect said:
Thanks Dac! But...er...Oviraptor doesn't return...it's just that Aragorn in his royal clothing and ban gun make him look like the king.
Thanks Stealth.
Thanks Martin!
I have felt that the homour is solely the parodies and I'm going to do something about that. I keep telling myself to remember to add some original humour.
As for the plot dragging...well I don't know what to do about that. The last four chapters are all battle oriented and less of a 'quest'. Next episode includes one of three plot twists which should up the pace.
At 5:50:22 AM on 9/27/2004, MartinRandle said:
Some fun and groovy stuff going on there - but it kind of needs to up the pace a bit. At this stage we should be heading for a climax - but I get the feel it will go on and on yet. It is really funny but the plot is starting to drag a little.
The humour is now becoming quotes verbatim taken straight from films with a few words changed to fit the characters.
I think you need to add more of your own material into these spoofs to make them fresh.
Mart
At 6:56:19 PM on 9/26/2004, Stealth Raptor2 said:
Heh, heh, I love my character:)
Really good installment, and I look forward t the next one!
At 6:53:06 PM on 9/26/2004, Dac said:
Very nice!
Vinsfeld's areas from BTTF, TTT, Finding Nemo and POTC, all rolled into one, was very clever. Nice sort of touch, though, what kind of parent names their son Captain (Panos's father, dimwit!)?
Aragorn's lines were a bit cringeworthy but the action gave back what it lost. And the Oviraptor return (?) is an odd touch
Keep going!
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