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You made the compies so damn vicious, seriously they were like little devils. I also like how they didn't give up and had to be put into place by the gun. Very nice.
I wanna hear/read Bradford's story!!! tell me now! >:
Also there was a real touch of emotions in that last scene, very touching.
~Dark Hunter
At 4:09:05 AM on 2/5/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
im catching up slowly. and i mean SLOWLY. i havent been on for 2 weeks, so im outta here to read the next 2 chapters!
this story rocks!
At 1:59:44 PM on 1/31/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks again JP...I can't believe you caught up! I must be slacking :)
Glad you all seem to like the journal ending...it's something that's been brewing in the back of my head for a while.
You don't trust Markinson? Why? He's such a nice guy, and a team player and all...lol
And working for Eichmann? Do be serious...
(Well, if he is, I'm not telling!)
Thanks again to all who read and commented...hope to have more coming soon!
At 1:15:35 PM on 1/31/2003, JPJunkee said:
Dumb Dr. Grant, he should have known! I mean just by looking at a compy's eyes you can tell they're an evil little lizard!
The end with the journal was great.
And I'm willing to bet, that Markinson has a different employer other than just Hammond. . . . Eichmann perhaps? I don't know. But I don't trust Markinson.
Great stuff! Probably one of my favorite chapters yet!
-- JPJunkee
At 2:10:45 PM on 1/29/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks for the feedback, Vader...and no worries about the delays...the next big delay will probably be the delay in writing another chapter (I don't know how you consistently turn out good chapters so close together!)
Thanks again to everyone who has stuck with me so far...
Stay tuned...
At 2:03:00 AM on 1/29/2003, Vader said:
Great action sequence, and nice job with the book segment as well. Keep up the nice work. :)
PS - Sorry it took me so long to get to reading it.
At 10:33:05 PM on 1/27/2003, yvonne said:
Finding that book and reading the inscription was a great way to end the chapter. Poor Lex.
I'm happy to see that the "good" guys (I use that term loosely ...lol) are starting to get along, although Markinson is somewhat not a team player.
And shame on Alan for not thinking those little devil creatures could hurt him. He almost paid with his life. That sequence was written very well, too. I could picture it all happening in my head, so I applaud you. :)
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