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The next chapters going to be a doosy i sense it.
Very nice, now that Hammond is arrested things are getting much more intese down on the mainland and on Sorna they are too.
Ooooh! i sense a climax approaching!
~Dark Hunter
At 2:45:11 AM on 2/9/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks, everyone for the comments...!
Vinsfeld and Crisco--glad you're enjoying it.
Yvonne--I'm sure Malcolm has a few other questions, but I'm not ready to give up any more answers just yet :) And raptors...it just wouldn't be a Jurassic Park story without those little buggers, eh? I have plans for them, I assure you :)...and thanks for the high praises on the dialogue. I'm pretty sure it's my favorite part to write, so I'm glad you consider it an "excellent talent" :)
Strider_Aragorn: Glad you caught up! And I'm also glad you're still reading, with so many other things going on.
JPJunkee: The song's gonna be a platinum hit, I just know it. It's good to know you dislike her as much as I do! But more than Eichmann? Hmmm...
Vader: Thanks for the praises...knowing that the characters "feel real" is a very good thing. It's one thing for the writer to be able to envision these people, but it's another for the reader to notice.
The growing collection of readers and comments makes me feel like my efforts have not been in vain (now I just have to hope I can live up to everyone's expectations!)
Thanks again for all the positive feedback. Stay tuned!
At 1:47:55 AM on 2/9/2003, Vader said:
The dialogue continues to keep its excellence, and the plot is flowing along very smoothly. The characters feel very real, and your effort and hard work comes across very much.
Great chapter, keep it up.
At 1:22:50 AM on 2/9/2003, JPJunkee said:
Sing it with me now!
"Cross is a bitch! She is going to die! She'll give Grant a nice big kiss, but then something will come along and pick her up in a big mouthful of teeth and thrash her back and forth throwing her blood and innards all about the jungle!"
Ahh, good song. If it's not clear, I do not like Cross. I like Eichmann more, in fact!
Good chapter, drucifer. I like the way the story is progressing.
-- JPJunkee
At 9:47:55 PM on 2/8/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Wow, that's awesome. The plot's getting thicker and thicker, and the people are still believable ... keep it up!
At 9:43:41 PM on 2/8/2003, yvonne said:
Another great chapter. :)
It's so very nice to have someone (Bradford) to answer all of Malcolm's questions. Cause I was wondering about the same things that Malcolm wonders. lol.
I liked the additional background info on Grant and Cross. She's really sort of bitter, isn't she? lol. At least she came around some, in regards to Grant's health condition.
I've been waiting for the raptors to attack, so now that they have decided to go through the valley, I'm sure our heroes will run into danger. :)
Lastly, but not surely not least ... I love reading the dialogue. You make it look so easy, writing dialogue. It really is a very excellent talent. :)
At 10:19:56 AM on 2/8/2003, Crisco said:
yea same,keep it up, ill be looking forward to it
At 2:52:22 AM on 2/8/2003, Vinsfeld said:
nice, i love the story and the characters
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