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the first encounter with a dino was a massive one indeed.
Loved the description used there, the dinosaur wasn't sure what was going on.But surely they shoulda brought more TOW missiles...
Great story.
~Dark Hunter
At 1:58:36 AM on 1/26/2003, JPJunkee said:
“Please, please, my friends call me Ian. You can call me Dr. Malcolm.”
LOL, great line! This line in itself is proof that you have captured the essence of Malcolm well.
And yay, spino got his brains splattered! Woohoo! That was cool, and nasty! Just the way I like it!
Keep up the good work!
-- JPJunkee
At 9:29:45 PM on 1/16/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks Vader...glad you liked it!
And I'm glad Malcolm's dialogue is your favorite part, because I think his dialogue is my favorite part to write, too...I think :)
Thanks again for the comments...
At 9:00:06 PM on 1/16/2003, Vader said:
One of the best chapters so far. Malcolm's dialogue is GREAT, and is becoming my favorite part of reading this story because its so dead-on/funny.
BTW, nice logo there.
Keep up the great work! :)
At 11:57:27 PM on 1/15/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks, as always, Strider_Aragorn and Yvonne! I'm always happy to receive comments about characterization--because that's the part that seems to require the most effort.
It was very important to me to get rid of the Spinosaurus early on...I just never liked that guy. In my mind, Tyrannosaur is the undisputed Master of the Beasts...
Thanks again, and stay tuned!
At 11:50:24 PM on 1/15/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
“Please, please, my friends call me Ian. You can call me Dr. Malcolm.”--Had me laughing for a while. THat's just like Malcolm! And then I thought wildly for a mo about Lex--the life-jacket scene in the JP Novel. Then the Spinosaurus got its head blown off! This is the best chapter so far. I love it. But, again, yvonne beat me to commenting. I was going to say about Malcolm's personality captured right ...
At 2:40:53 PM on 1/15/2003, yvonne said:
You had me very worried about Lex's well-being, for a second there. I love suspense. :)
The big and brave military guy, acting like a frightened child was cool, too. No one ever seems exactly ready to see these giant man-eating wonders. :)
The little references to the other movies (the tear gas part comes to mind) is a nice little way to connect this story to the ones from before. I like that.
Malcolm isn't ready to give up what he knows, and that certainly is just like him. You've captured his personality very well.
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