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The dialogue was extremely well done, well written, cut and performed, it is almost as ifthe reader can see what it is the characters are doing, it is rare for this to happen in a fan fic.
(thats a complement ;))
The character development is also very nicely done.
I am enjoying this story :)
~Dark Hunter
At 9:32:32 PM on 4/8/2003, drucifer67 said:
Perfunctory...hmmm...perhaps so.
Looking back, it reads as if maybe I was trying too hard.
Glad you seem to be enjoying it. Hope you stick around ---the dialogue improves, I promise :)
At 6:05:32 PM on 4/8/2003, The Host said:
Oh, I forgot. . .
9/10
-H
At 6:04:00 PM on 4/8/2003, The Host said:
The dialogue seems a bit perfunctory . . . Still, this was *extremely* well-written. I remain impressed.
-The Host
At 11:44:30 AM on 1/22/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks, JPJunkee...I have tried to put a lot of focus on dialogue, and it's always nice when someone notices :)
I hope that you all keep reading and commenting--and I hope I don't let you down! (don't expect too much and you won't be disappointed lol)
Thanks again to all who left feedback...
At 11:14:14 AM on 1/22/2003, JPJunkee said:
It felt so damn real. . . . like what I was reading, was actually taking place right beside me. And Grant's dialogue was perfect, and I do mean PERFECT.
Uncanny job, drucifer. You're really quite talented.
-- JPJunkee
At 1:56:26 AM on 1/19/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, RaptorHiss...it's always good to turn the page and find a new positive comment here :)
At 1:30:52 AM on 1/19/2003, RaptorHiss said:
Very excellent read...I'm glad I finally got around to reading this fine peice of literature
The emotion was defiently there, I could feel the vib:)
At 1:40:13 AM on 1/15/2003, drucifer67 said:
Superb, even!
Thanks Tyranno and Yvonne...I hope I can manage to keep the story interesting for everyone!
At 2:07:20 PM on 1/12/2003, TyrannoRex112 said:
Another superb chapter. On to Chapter 2.
At 12:15:39 PM on 12/30/2002, yvonne said:
Well, since I already read chapter 3 and I already knew that Grant was in it ... I just wanted to say that this would be the chapter where I would say ...
Yay! Grant is in it. lol.
There was some great dialogue in this chapter and I'm glad that Lex turned to Grant for help. And that last line from Lex, should help get Grant involved in the rescue attempt. She's clever. :)
Oh, and Grant's remark about Malcolm's book cracked me up. :)
Onto chapter 2!
At 3:11:03 AM on 12/21/2002, drucifer67 said:
Thanks for the positives!! Makes me wanna write more...
Chapter Two is almost polished...I'll try to put it up tomorrow, if possible...then there will be the standard "Holiday Delay" and I'll be set to start writing chapter three...
Thanks again for the praises! Tell your friends about it !! :)
At 1:40:58 AM on 12/21/2002, Robzyraptor! said:
cant wait till you write chapter 2. I have been in support of this fic since i read the prologue
love it
At 6:32:34 PM on 12/20/2002, Crisco said:
awesome!!! keep it up, i have been waiting to hear a fanfic with lex in it!! keep up the good work
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