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Yes the dialogue is excellent, as is Malcolms character and all the characters mna, you've done an excellent job here.
~Dark Hunter
At 9:39:26 PM on 4/8/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks once again, Host...good to have your opinions.
Read on :)
At 6:22:47 PM on 4/8/2003, The Host said:
Good dialogue . . . Interesting characters . . . Eloquent . . . And Hammond! Brilliant.
9.5./10
-H
At 11:54:17 PM on 1/22/2003, JPJunkee said:
Reading your dialogue between your characters, lets me know that the author is very intelligent. Because the dialogue is just so real. It really is what I would consider, a professional's work.
I'm actually quite angered with myself that I never read any of this story earlier. It is great!
Keep up the good work! Oh, and cool logo.
-- Dr. JPJunkee
At 7:34:13 AM on 12/29/2002, drucifer67 said:
Thanks Yvonne! I am thrilled to have received praise from other authors whose work I respect. When not writing I have read parts of Alan & Ellie and am quite impressed.
Just a note: When you go back to read the first two chapters, there is also a brief prologue...it sort of sets up the story, and sets the tone. I wrote it this way in keeping with the JPark tradition: Jurassic Park started with the Incident at Isla Nublar where the worker is attacked, The Lost World began with the pleasure boaters and the compys, and JPIII opened with the parasailing incident. All three then fell into strictly linear storytelling--and I wanted to stick to that style. So I think the prologue is important :)
And...as always...thanks Robzyraptor! You've been a great encouragement from the beginning...kinda like a one-member fan club...knowing someone is reading keeps me writing...
Again, thanks everyone for the praises...
At 1:32:24 AM on 12/29/2002, yvonne said:
I ran across this and started to read it without reading the beginning chapters. It's pretty good. Throwing Alan and Lex together, along with Tim now, is a good idea. I'm fond of stories with returning JP characters, so I'm going to do my best to follow the rest of it. :)
And I'll have to check out the other 2 chapters to see what I missed. :)
At 1:08:37 AM on 12/29/2002, Robzyraptor! said:
Great, as always, drucifer. keep it up mate
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