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very interesting, now they have nop transport and what a way for their transport to go.
The fact you have put dangerous herbivores into this is great, for once we get to see the immense power and beauty of such beasts, its great.
Great story and dialogue and characters.
~Dark Hunter
At 12:49:48 AM on 1/27/2003, JPJunkee said:
VERY cool action sequence! Finally an interesting action scene with herbivores. Congrats!
I liked the descriptions, and the dialogue a lot. And I'll be honest, I'm sorry to see Mason die. . . I kinda liked him, but oh well. And it seems Wallace will be returning. Awesome! I really liked him.
Keep up the good work.
-- JPJunkee
At 6:05:35 AM on 1/17/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Finally, a trike-attack! This is the best jp movie ever, and i ... hang on, it isnt a movie! anyway, I love the descriptions in this, its just ... just ... more! Need more!
At 12:51:03 AM on 1/17/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks for the comments...they're positive again! YAY! Every time I write an action sequence I cringe a little, hoping I got it right...thanks for the thumbs-up on the trike sequence, Vader, I needed it :)
I really didn't set out to make things the way they are between Lex and Grant...but there they are. You know how it happens...the characters start telling you what to write...
About Wallace: He's just InGen's Equipment guy--other than Eichmann's interest in him, he hasn't had any part in the story since the boat left the dock ... :)
Thanks again for the supportive comments, you two...writing has always been fun for me, but stuff like this makes it even more fun :)
Stay tuned for Chapter Eleven!
At 12:33:59 AM on 1/17/2003, yvonne said:
A herbivore in action! I love that sort of thing. :)
It looks as though Malcolm is in deep trouble. Looking forward to how he fares.
Lex is a strong willed woman. I like how she handled Rick. And the small conversation she had with Grant on the overturned log was interesting, too. They have a nice rapport. :)
And suddenly, I'm wondering what happened to Wallace. I don't remember for some reason. Sorry about that. Could you fill me in?
At 12:30:59 AM on 1/17/2003, Vader said:
That was a great chapter - I really enjoyed the action with the trike. It was well written, so that you could clearly understand what was going on.
I'll keep saying it: Keep it up! This is a great JP Fan-fic. :)
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