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He really does care!!! Grant that is ;)
Great character development of Grant's character is possibly the most incredible thing in this chapter as is the whole lets run we're being chased by dinosaurs, we actually see a lot more human emotions in this chapter.
Excellent work
~Dark Hunter
At 7:54:45 PM on 1/27/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks for yet another positive comment, JP...
Y'know...I didn't realize what an odd name Carlisle was until I started getting feedback on this fanfic...there's a singer named Bob Carlisle...a Carlisle chain of hotels...and even a town called Carlisle, Massachusetts. Maybe I should have spelled it "Carlyle" so it wouldn't look so strange on the page...
Anyhow...odd names aside, I hope you're liking it so far...read on!
At 1:18:13 PM on 1/27/2003, JPJunkee said:
I love the way it switches from Malcolm's story to Grant's, it's flawless!
Great little argument at the end between Grant and Charlisle (is that spelled right? It's a very odd name). And the whole thing with Eichmann and the blunt object idea was very cool too.
I've said it before, and I'll say it again. This story is awesome, keep up the good work!
-- JPJunkee
At 1:37:31 AM on 1/20/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks, Yvonne...glad to hear you liked the Grant/Carlisle conflict...and, for what it's worth, you can expect some more human conflict in the chapters to come. Of course it wouldn't be a Jurassic Park story without that dino action, though :)
Thanks again all, and stay tuned!
At 11:40:42 PM on 1/19/2003, yvonne said:
Previously, I had thought that Bradford sort of liked Malcolm ... but after this chapter, I realize that I was wrong. lol.
The Grant/Carlisle disagreement was good. Human conflict, as well as running from dinos, is always a great added treat to a story .. for me anyway.
Looking forward to the action that's coming up. :)
At 6:09:25 PM on 1/19/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks Vader...glad to see you're still following along :)
---"Gearing up for some great action on the island"---
Yep, I'm heading that way--I hope not to disappoint!
Stay Tuned...
At 5:09:09 PM on 1/19/2003, Vader said:
Seems like things are really gearing up for some great action on the island. I liked the dispute between Alan and Charlisle (what a weird name, lol).
Great chapter!
At 1:08:39 PM on 1/19/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks, Crisco...I appreciate you taking the time to comment. I can't get enough of the positives :) Stay tuned...
At 1:05:34 PM on 1/19/2003, Crisco said:
its hard not to switch around a ton, my fanfic, Jurassic Park IV: Extinction does a ton of that, u have a great story one of the best i ever heard, i desperately want to send Monahan some our stories and action sequences, we could make a kick ass movie
At 10:39:23 AM on 1/19/2003, drucifer67 said:
Or maybe it wasn't! :/
At 10:38:59 AM on 1/19/2003, drucifer67 said:
Now that they've made it to the island and things are beginning to get moving, the switching back and forth is going to be greatly reduced. We'll still get to peek in on Malcolm and his predicament, but this is, after all, a Jurassic Park mov--I mean story.
Thanks as always for the comment...stay tuned :)
<i>maybe it was the missing bracket-thingy that killed your html? </i>
At 5:28:47 AM on 1/19/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
i guess, html doesnt work here ...
At 5:28:02 AM on 1/19/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Whoah, sweeet. Alan's pretty angry at Carlisle ... and for good reason. The only thing wrong I can find is the switching back and forth; it wasn't in the movie much. Complicated though, definitely thought-through, and as ever, the descriptions are <Isuperb</I>
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