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very very very very cool.
I didn't get that line til you cleared it up with Yvonne.
But this story is excellent, very well drawn out and obviously planned well. I am enjoying every second of it.
One more good thing about this story, it doesn't go into long overdrawn pointless babbling speeches or description, everything is to the point.
~Dark Hunter
At 1:44:54 AM on 1/26/2003, JPJunkee said:
Eichmann. . . . I don't trust this man, no I think is a rotten weasel. Yes, a true sneaky Nazi man, he is.
Good chapter, drucifer. You really know how to make a reader curious, and look forward to more once he's done reading what he's already read.
In fact, that's what I'm going for now! MORE!
-- JPJunkee
At 6:26:05 AM on 1/15/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Gooooood ... too good. I can't believe how complicating it's getting! Malcolm in some place, Grant going to that other place and the dude with the thing on that other thing's going to thing! I don't believe it! So there's another 'short' chapter? well get it over with, I say! I can't wait till the longer chapters.
At 1:44:04 AM on 1/15/2003, yvonne said:
Looking forward to it :)
And you're very welcome for the comments. :)
At 1:13:26 AM on 1/15/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks Vader and Yvonne...
I appreciate the comment on Malcolm's dialogue...there's work involved in that, believe it or not!
And yeah, Eichmann's implying that he's superceded only by the President (I wondered if that Pennsylvania Avenue line was going to be clear enough)
Anyhow...chapter nine (the last short chapter) is coming up VERY soon, so stay tuned :)
At 1:03:50 AM on 1/15/2003, yvonne said:
This Eichmann fellow is a very sneaky guy. And now he's hinting at working for the president (I think). Wow. Malcolm better shut up before he gets himself into a LOT more trouble. lol.
Plus, Malcolm didn't get the chance to call Grant, so that leaves Grant and company in a lurch, as well.
This really is quite entertaining. I'm so very glad that I clicked on the links to this story. I would have missed a lot. :)
At 7:29:52 PM on 1/14/2003, Vader said:
I loved how you made Malcolm sutter and repeatedly say "ah" because that was VERY true to the JP films - he talks exactly like that.
Great chapter, keep up the great work. :D
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