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Great chapter i really liked it how the allosaurs were puzzled at why Ramirez wasn't running, hehe, great scene.
This story is amazing.
~Dark Hunter
At 11:49:24 PM on 1/29/2003, JPJunkee said:
Ramirez is dead? I feel like I'm going to cry! Nah, just kidding, I hated that guy, and I say good riddance! And also, I say, good death! hehe
You know it may seem odd, but I'm enjoying Malcolm's story more than Grant's. . . . it just seems more original, and also throw in the fact that you write Malcolm so brilliantly.
But, that is not to say that I don't enjoy the Grant story, it too is very good, and is truly interesting.
This is one of the better JP fics I've read in a long while, keep up the good work!
-- JPJunkee
At 1:36:35 AM on 1/27/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
Well written, I cant believe hes dead! :) And by allosaurs, very good
At 8:43:58 AM on 1/26/2003, Vader said:
Hey I'm on my way out the door (heading on vacation), but I just finished reading. Great work. I'll be sure to check out the next chapter. :D
At 2:29:39 AM on 1/26/2003, drucifer67 said:
Ramirez...I've waited for this moment...I've had his death planned since about chapter nine...the moral? Know your dinos...:)
Yeah, Rick...Rick Rick Rick. He's irritating...he's inflammatory...he's a pain...of COURSE she's gonna decide he's likeable!
And you have a good point about Alan--I overlooked a detail there that should not have been missed. I think it ought to at least be mentioned. I'll most likely sneak in and do a little edit later on :)
Thanks for the comments...stay tuned!
At 2:23:20 AM on 1/26/2003, yvonne said:
Ramirez. Dead. Good. lol. That was clever to have that jerk think it was still the rex, and then realize his error in the last seconds. :)
Lex thinking of ... Rick. I think that's who she was alluring to in her mind. In the last chapter, I had gotten the notion of her liking him. It's a cool development ... if that's who she was thinking about.
I would think that Grant would still have been feeling the pain from that fight, but nothing was said of it really. But that's okay, I'm just nitpicking because there's nothing else to nitpick about. lol.
This was another good chapter, in the ongoing story that still has me addicted. Keep it up! :)
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