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real good stuff
kept me laughing all night long
did a good job covering the whole movie and pointing out some kooky parts
should do the sequals
At 12:35:57 PM on 5/20/2003, JPJunkee said:
Heh, that was pretty good. You actually pointed out a few things bout JP, that I hadn't ever even realized. . . and made it into a joke. . . hehe. . . good stuff.
My favorite parts were:
(NOTE: No one knows what becomes of this poor fellow, and I for one am dying of curiosity. Perhaps this lone raptor, trapped in a meat locker, deserves a sequel all to himself).
lol
And:
ELLIE: Lysine, wow, any plant that produces a bean or seedpod will contain lysine. Wouldn’t it have made much more sense to fit them all with collars made of plastic explosives, so that you could press a big red button in the control room and blow their goddam heads off?
HAMMOND: Where were you when we were planning this place?
I got a good laugh out of that one.
Overall, it was pretty food. I got a good chuckle out of a few things. But, it was all written rather odd. I got lost in some of the narrative at times.
But it was an enjoyable read.
:)
-- JPJunkee
At 1:56:57 AM on 3/7/2003, yvonne said:
LOL. This was very funny. I have two favorite parts:
"Timmy is most likely a human battery at the moment, storing enough voltage to blow Grant’s well-worn fedora all the way back to San Jose (which, incidentally, is back in its original location by now)."
LMAO
and
"Meanwhile, Tim is jumping up and down and squeaking like a Happy Meal toy, and no one thinks to ask him to please come give Uncle Alan the big bad shotgun so he can chase away the mean old raptors."
LMAO at the Happy Meal Toy part there! Very unexpected and funny. :)
This must have taken awhile to write ... you've pretty much covered the entire movie, and that's a very big accomplishment in itself. Good job with this!
*ahem* EXCEPT for the Ellie getting with Malcolm part. OY.
:)
At 7:23:39 AM on 1/15/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
tee hee ... good for a giggle . So whens JP: X-F chapter 9 coming out???
At 1:36:30 AM on 1/15/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks Vader...
I should warn you people, if you keep saying good things about my work, I'm going to be forced to keep posting...
At 11:14:20 PM on 1/13/2003, Vader said:
That's some wacky humor, and it was pretty funny. It reminded me of BrainW14's stuff (you should check out his stories some time, because quite a few are hilarious).
Nice job.
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