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Possibly the most stunning encounter with a Tyrannosaur to date, loved the suspense, would he eat them? or wouldn't he?
the first time in a JP series that mercenaries have actually listened to other people.
Very well done.
~Dark Hunter
At 12:45:38 PM on 1/29/2003, JPJunkee said:
Oooo. . . . what a nerve racking chapter that was! The conflict between Grant and the stupid men with guns was great! And the rex scene was very detailed, and very suspenseful.
I am really liking this story, keep up the good work!
-- JPJunkee
At 7:03:12 PM on 1/25/2003, drucifer67 said:
Fantastic...oooh...I like that word!
I'm expecting the story to run 25-30 chapters overall, butat this point it's hard to be sure. Unless the engine conks out and I crash this thing, it should go at least 25 chapters.
Again, thanks for the feedback...
At 6:26:19 PM on 1/25/2003, TyrannoRex112 said:
Dude, this story is fantastic! How many chapters to you plan on writing?
At 2:12:23 AM on 1/25/2003, drucifer67 said:
Thanks, everyone who commented...
Yvonne: Glad you found it intense...I hoped I was getting that feeling across but I can never be sure...
And I'm glad you liked the details...I've been working on slowing the pace down and including more little bits like that...
Strider--You're happy to see Rex again, eh? Me too! He's the real hero of the JPark movies! You're right about the action slowing down...I'm trying to pace myself a little, and I'm having a hard time getting in the middle between too fast and too slow...but I'm working on it...
Vader--I'm glad to see you're still following along. I'm hoping not to lose anybody along the way--I hope to keep it interesting.
Thanks again, everyone...and stay tuned!
At 11:19:39 AM on 1/24/2003, Vader said:
Great description, great action. I love how you describe the Tyrannosaurs roaring - its great to see another author who appreciates detail like that.
Great chapter. :D
At 9:55:20 PM on 1/23/2003, Strider_Aragorn said:
i suppose i have to type all that stuff again do I? not today! you know what ive written
keep it up!
At 9:54:02 PM on 1/23/2003, yvonne said:
Wow! That was very intense. Written very, very well. And most of all ... it left me wanting more. lol.
More. More. More.
I love the amount of detail in this chapter, right down to the "sweat coursed down his face and neck." I am really enjoying this story!
The confrontation with Grant and the others was written well, too. My reaction to the situation was exacly how Lex acted. hehe. Excellent job, drucifer. :)
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