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means the user is online now! At 11:12:48 PM on 6/12/2002, CarnaRaptor said: the overall feel of this chapter is subpar. the dialogue is weak(dont worry it usally always is) and at times is predictable
At 10:12:30 PM on 6/12/2002, Dino_Dude said: Hey, another good chapter. U managed to keep it entertaining without having to use any death. All the better for character development, I say, helps readers feel more for anything that happens to characters later on. Good work! Look forward to the next chapter.
Cheers!
<i>Dino_Dude</i>
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