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means the user is online now! At 9:43:42 AM on 6/10/2002, dark hunter said: wow. Great story man.
~Dark Hunter
At 3:57:03 AM on 6/10/2002, Dino_Dude said: A little slow running. Farely original death scene, that's one point to ya!
If you say the pace will pick up then, hopefully there's more to look forward too.
At 1:11:08 AM on 6/10/2002, aragorn_8 said: Thanks. The first few chapters are kinda slow, as they are meant to be for getting to know the characters. Starting on Chapter 5 or 6, it picks up pace until the end. (Chapter 15)
At 11:47:41 PM on 6/9/2002, CarnaRaptor said: Though my full attention wasnt reached. there was a somewhat eerie presence and a very funny conclusion to this chapter
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