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I know, but I don't really like to swear alot. I will once in a while, but not alot, so that's why Crap is used instead of shit.
At 6:22:08 PM on 3/29/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>This was very, very cool. I enjoyed it thouroghly. Very creative idea. You don't exactly know who the bad guys are. There a few problems in it. I didn't really like the way you used "Crap!" So much it wasn't really, well you should have used more things like shit, er.. just not as much crap.
Even with a few problems this fan fic reads mostly higher than my rating system will allow.
10/10.
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-What you just witnessed was the bite of the compy. Goodnight.</font>
<font color=Skkyblue>32 Days until Return To The Castle</font>
<a href=http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/tobycompy2.0-Demented_Dinosaurs__Special_Edition.asp>
Demented Dinosaurs: Special Edition</a>
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