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Yeah, it was a little confusing with it being so much different, but very interesting.
Very good story!
At 11:26:49 PM on 9/12/2003, paleeoguy said:
"Sir, you are not a paleontologist."
LOL! That was very funny!
I liked your story. I had a little trouble following it because these asian characters kept interfering with the apotsrophes and such, but it was all good. : )
Nice job, keep it up.
Lee
At 5:17:21 AM on 9/12/2003, MartinRandle said:
Great story however, so far removed from the first part that I had to go back and check they were part of the same fan fic.
Obviously every thing will connect in the end but it was confusing.
Looking forward to getting on Biosyn's "aquapark".
Well written bar for a couple of grammatical errors
"It was well keep, the grass cut," (kept)
"Even though I had to purpose it to Mr. Abercrombie," (propose)
Martin.
At 7:36:40 PM on 9/11/2003, Crisco said:
Looks real good, looking forward to part 3
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