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Ah, what a brave man you are.
After all that has just occured, you're still absolutely ready and willing to stand up to your girl.
I'm slightly confused as to the end, yet intrigued at the same time! I wonder what that car engine could portend... :D
Great work as always!
Cheers,
Dino_Dude
At 10:17:10 PM on 3/14/2003, Majestic-1 said:
I'm confused.. who won?
At 10:15:13 AM on 3/14/2003, JPJunkee said:
The fight scene in this chapter, was really good. Like Yvonne said, I was able to picture it all unfolding in my head as I read it. It was honorable (I think that would be the word) that you would stand up for Erin like you did.
The ending left me anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
-- JPJunkee
At 1:33:43 AM on 3/14/2003, yvonne said:
What a great and exciting chapter, Vader. I pictured everything in my head perfectly. And you're such a hero, trying to keep Kevin away from Erin. Good for you! She hates you, yet you still protect her. That could earn you points later, maybe. :)
And the whole car thing at the end has me intrigued. Good job there, too! :)
At 1:17:38 AM on 3/14/2003, GenRptrVinny500 said:
I think maj will be happy this time.
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