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Not only do you have a true talent for writing Vader, but a true talent for expressing a characters emotions in the finest possible way! Of course, that character is yourself, so maybe that helps slightly, lol.
Man, this truly was an expressive chapter, and even though I haven't been reading this story from its beginning, simply from the emotions you've portrayed here I can get a feel for what you have already been through already.
Man, I don't know what else to say, I'm flabbergasted (in the sense of the word), so I think I'll leave it at that, lol.
Great work, and I'll be looking forward to more!
Cheers,
Dino_Dude
At 2:12:05 PM on 2/24/2003, drucifer67 said:
It just keeps getting better.
Your narrative style is charged with emotion...it's hard for the reader not to feel at least a little something when reading your work.
Looking forward to more...
At 12:36:09 PM on 2/24/2003, yvonne said:
I'm hoping that something "happy" happens in your life soon. :)
This chapter seemed very personal to me ... maybe even the most personal. It's like everything you have been thinking in your head so far ... all of that came into realization, with just one quick talk with Rachel. But, it does seem to me, that she's not as mad as before, so there could still be a friendship there, if given a little more time.
This is like a soap opera. I'm getting way too into this. lol.
Good job, Vader. :)
At 11:48:26 AM on 2/24/2003, JPController said:
Good, interesting, and cool!
Did I mention cool?
At 12:42:23 AM on 2/24/2003, JPJunkee said:
You know what? I think I might have actually run out of good things to say about this story. I mean, every single chapter, I say how good it is. . . . and then the next chapter, I basically repeat myself. It's an odd thing, that a story could remain so consistent in its great quality. You Vader, you are a writer, and a damn good one at that.
But like you mentioned in your last line, you are a tormented soul. . . . jeez dude, it's almost hard to believe that so much crap could happen to one guy. I feel for ya.
-- JPJunkee
At 8:32:48 PM on 2/23/2003, Majestic-1 said:
Good. Duh.
At 5:50:04 PM on 2/23/2003, Spinoboy11 said:
Very, very deep chapter, Vader. You wrote this in great detail and I enjoyed it a lot.
10/10
Keep it up!
-Spinoboy11
-Signature Designer & #1 Fan of the Tampa Bay Buccaneers
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