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Yeah, Dan, they are. :)
At 9:15:03 AM on 1/17/2003, Dan said:
Heh, are these true stories? :)
-Dan
At 12:32:27 AM on 1/17/2003, JPJunkee said:
Rachel, Rachel, Rachel. . . . tisk tisk. It seems as though she blames you, and when really it's not your fault. She has to learn how to open her eyes. . .
And you gotta learn how to greet a girl better.
Jeez dude, ya break her hand, and you try to kiss her multiple times. And then ya say that ya wanna go steady with her. How could you not be expecting a cold slap to the face? Oh man.
Well, great story. And really superb writing. I was glued to my computer screen. hehe
I can't wait for more! It's awesome!
-- Dr. JPJunkee
Yes, I am a doctor. I graduated from Harvard!
At 12:09:54 AM on 1/17/2003, yvonne said:
Hey, from a female perspective ..... what were you thinking just blurting that out like that??? I was reading it and I was like "Oh no! Anything but that!"
Oh, man .... you've got me immersed in this story, Vader. Even more so now I think.
That was heartbreakingly beautiful, all the images of the future you hoped to have with Rachel. If anything, if she were to read this story, she'd understand everything that you were going through. Although, I'm not sure if she would like reading about how you rescued Erin's purse.
The way you write this, I feel like I'm witnessing it all first hand, like watching it on television or something.
Translation for all the above rambling : I love this story! :)
At 11:00:06 PM on 1/16/2003, Majestic-1 said:
Wow. Shafted.
At 9:27:41 PM on 1/16/2003, drucifer67 said:
Another good chapter--well done! The story keeps drawing me in, making me want to know what's next.
Rachel. Bah.
Keep it coming!
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