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Very entertaining Vader! I enjoyed the read :)
At 1:11:47 AM on 1/14/2003, yvonne said:
In all the action, you've managed to make me feel your pain ..... the sprained ankle, the tiredness, etc.
And like JPJunkee said, the detailed explanation of the club was wonderful. It's a good thing you didn't get carded at the bar. You would have been found out by Luke. (Although, shame on those people for not checking ID better!)
Looking ahead, I'm hoping that your parents didn't go to check on you, while you were away, but I'm sure we'll all know soon enough. Great stuff, Vader. :)
At 11:19:20 PM on 1/13/2003, JPJunkee said:
Well, you're developing quite an attitude, aren't you? hehe
And now you're a hero! And pretty good on a bike! Wow! You were all like, Super College Dude to the rescue!!!. . . .
That sounded dumb. Hmmm. . . .
Anyway, great chapter, Vader. I liked how you described the club, it fealt very real. And the chase was cool too, good action.
This is probably one of my favorite chapters, yet! Keep up the good work.
-- JPJunkee
At 11:06:03 PM on 1/13/2003, Chavez said:
I kinda feel bad for Luke. But man I would be really scared if i was in a place underage getting a alcohol product and going through the trouble of thinking someone might catch me. Im a nervous person. Nice chapter.
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