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Great chapter again, Vader.
At 9:26:35 AM on 1/13/2003, JPJunkee said:
Yes, I'll agree your grandparents were quite humorous. LoL
Once again, the way you write this story is nothing short of amazing. Whether you're writing the wonderful dialogue, the very descriptive inner thoughts, or how you make the story almost flow like a poem.
It's just uncanny!
Great chapter, Vader! And I look forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
At 12:52:08 AM on 1/13/2003, Chavez said:
nice chapter!
At 11:57:34 PM on 1/12/2003, yvonne said:
LOL. Your grandparents are hilarious. :)
The way you state your inner thoughts are wonderful. It makes your actions very understandable.
It's so very true, when someone adds their own two cents to your viewpoint, that it clouds your viewpoint. You didn't have a bad thought in your head about Rachel, until Luke put it in there. And the way you conveyed those thoughts in the story was ..... again ..... wonderful. :)
I had a thought, though. Did Luke think it strange that you rode into the city on a bike? :)
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