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interesting story it is completely different from every other story appearing on these pages which i think is why i am liking it so much!
fantastic work, very intriguing look into the mind of a 16 year old, good work.
~Dark Hunter
At 4:53:36 PM on 12/10/2002, Bish said:
<font color=dodgerblue>I love it, it is better than most of the stories being posted now a-days.
At 12:31:44 AM on 12/10/2002, Chavez said:
Your details are so vivid that I had the perfect picture in my mind. Though who is Rachel? Did you mention her in the prologue? You probably did, and I just forgot. But I must say, i am completely engulfed in this story and am awaiting the next chapter with anticipation.
At 11:54:11 PM on 12/9/2002, JPJunkee said:
I like your mom! She adds a little comic releif. It probably wasn't funny for you at the time, but it was funny to me!
Really good writing, Vader. I'm looking forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
At 11:53:43 PM on 12/9/2002, Ben said:
I love it, Vader. Why am I not surprised at the quality of work here again?
(BTW - Slayer is in it's 4th season now, so check that out if you get around to it.)
At 11:50:10 PM on 12/9/2002, yvonne said:
Well, it's not action packed, full of dinosaurs chasing people .... but it's still very good. I am finding it fascinating to look into the mind of a 16 year old young man.
But you do seem to have issues about your mother. She's not really that air-headed is she, Vader? I bet she's not. Mothers are great people, responsible for bringing up strange little teenagers. So give her a break. lol. :)
At 8:44:06 PM on 12/9/2002, Vinsfeld said:
wow, that was the most boring piece of work i have ever read, if i could i'd give you a lower grade than an F but its impossible. what a waste of time. Boring concept. try something better. You usually write really good story's too. stop using drugs in college.
At 7:44:40 PM on 12/9/2002, raptorfood said:
cool vader :)
i did not know you came here still.
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