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Well part one was a blast, had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, fantasically done vader.
I especially loved the arena scene, it had fun, not just action action action, it seemed like you had a good time writing it, which showed i enjoyed it alot great work. This story is a great piece of work
~Dark Hunter
At 4:36:49 PM on 5/6/2002, Parasaur.w said:
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<font color=gray>Great work! Involved plot, I was captured soon after I began reading. Nice story development. It moves along smoothly. Dialogue was done VERY well. It is very realistic and dramatic. Good detail. I felt right in the middle of things. I have noticed that you have a very unique writin style. This a very enjoyable read, and I look to Part 2 with anticipation!
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At 1:17:34 AM on 5/6/2002, yvonne said:
Part 1 was very interesting. I really liked how you described the demolition derby sequence. I could easily picture every action packed thing happening. River and Para getting closer was handled very well, too. And this Nick Van Owen person--I'm looking forward to finding out what his deal is. :)
Well, it looks as though I'll be reading part 2 tomorrow. I'm really tired, so I'm calling it a night. Great job on part 1, Vader. :)
At 1:31:52 PM on 5/5/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Esquisite Work
At 11:24:46 PM on 5/4/2002, Dac said:
Ah, yes, the Demo Derby
"It'd be like killing two compies with one stone"
At 11:14:42 PM on 5/4/2002, Spinoboy11 said:
Bravo!!! Very good job, Vader!
On to part 2!
<I>-Spinoboy11</I>
<I>-Night Vision & Domestic Signature Designer</I>
At 10:42:42 PM on 5/4/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Hey I'll read the rest of it later ok? It's dinner time. Well so far it's really great!
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