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<font color=skyblue>Whoa...this is your best work yet! I am so tempted to give this a 9.5! Which is crazy! LoL, good stuff</font>
At 5:51:55 PM on 1/11/2002, Utahraptor111287 said:
It's very well written. I only have a couple problems. Are those Velociraptors, or anohter species of Dromaeosaur? If so, then they should be FULLY feathered, and the babies would have feathers all over their body, whether they WERE Dromeaosaurs, or Tyrannosaurids, or what have you. It would remind him MUCH MORE of a bird. Otherwise, it's pretty good. Keep it up.
At 5:02:52 PM on 1/11/2002, JP Animal Control said:
Wow! Excelent story. Keep up the good work.
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At 11:50:52 PM on 1/10/2002, Jurassiclaw said:
I just read Act1 and the prologue. Man, it friggon ROCKS! The Debate with Malcolm was absolutely superb, and this' even better. Wow!
4.5 / 5
A W E S O M E !
At 4:43:44 PM on 1/10/2002, jurassicchic31 said:
Well...what can I say....Excellent as usual.
At 8:45:18 PM on 1/9/2002, Mega T.rex 14 said:
Asome story the next one I hope will be as good if not better!
At 7:57:12 PM on 1/9/2002, JPController said:
<font color=Red>Great JOB! I give it 10 Thumbs UP!</font>
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At 6:54:51 PM on 1/9/2002, Vito Hardy said:
Great job man. this is a very good story and i love everything about it. can't wait for the next chapter.
At 5:10:43 PM on 1/9/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Another excellent read Vader bravo!
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