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Instead of leaving a detailed comment here, I'll go straight to Act V! Very good work none the less! I'm still noticing a couple of missing words though. ;)
At 11:10:37 PM on 7/6/2002, yvonne said:
Wow, I have to say that the extinction of Pangea really disturbed me, but it was something that needed to be done. I'm glad you chose to deal with that aspect.
But Gavin leaving his 3 year old girl? All alone? When he's not even sure where the dinosaur is? That didn't seem so believable to me. But I'll get over it. :)
And I'm glad that the Fox guy was arrested. This story has really stirred up my emotions. I'm very much into the settings and situations that you've created with your writing. It has just enough detail and emotion.
At 12:03:22 PM on 7/6/2002, Neo-the1 said:
Kick ass man.....
just, please, change the bloody font color....
<i>However bright the light, the shadows are deeper- ~NeO~</i>
At 4:43:57 PM on 7/5/2002, AG5 [Critic] said:
<font color=Maroon>Excellent detail in this Act. I like the FBI's involvement, gives the story a fresh feel. I can't wait for the conclusion as I've heard there might be a surprise in order? I dunno, I think I read that in one of Carna's reviews. Anyway, you've put substancial effort into the making of this fan-fic and believe me, it shows. Good character development and nice pacing. Great job Vader!</font>
At 4:39:04 PM on 7/4/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>WHOA! This one really kicked butt! I think I'm gonna read it again. 2nd best act yet!</font>
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-What you just witnessed was the bite of the compy. Goodnight.</font>
<a href=http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/tobycompy2.0-The_Timeline_of_the_Gun.asp><font color=Silver>The Timeline of the Gun</font></a>
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