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I enjoyed getting some background info on Reno and Key. That was a good addition to the story. They are both very likable, even though they work for the government, they seem like people with morals. lol. And I was wondering how Joel and Hayden were going to interact with the other characters. I like how they've turned to the FBI with their valuable information.
The introduction of the dino to the public was written very well. By the time Piper finally stopped that idiot from controlling the injured Deinonychus, I was just as angry as she was. There was a great emotional balance there and I'm glad to see that Piper is starting to think the whole thing might not have been a good idea.
I'm having a great time reading this story, as it gets me very emotional. :)
At 9:50:37 PM on 7/3/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>Whooaaa, that was pretty good, It was awesome! But it wasn't better than the first two, but it was still better than most fan fics :)</font>
At 9:49:39 PM on 7/3/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
I agree. Very good Vader.
At 2:38:52 PM on 7/3/2002, Carna [Mod] said:
Great sense of mystery involved. Kickass
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