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The background of the tribe was very fascinating. It was a nice touch to the story. Joel and Hayden exploring and sneaking around was also very cool. As you described what they were seeing ... the dinosaur skeletons, the tram car, the earthquake fault, the cages, etc ... all of the detailed images from the first Leviathans rushed back into my head. It was unexpected and very pleasant. And you didn't waste any time getting the brothers right into the middle of the mystery that is Pangaea. Great job, Vader :)
At 3:11:21 PM on 6/29/2002, tobycompy2.0 said:
<font color=Brick red>Whoa! This was very awesome, I FINALLY got down to reading the ACT I sequel to my favorite fan fiction, and let me tell you it was everything I thought it could be:
Amazingly Original (Even innovative to the the first one)
Great Character Development, like the first.
Intelligent writing.
Not quite as good the first yet. But almost.
I loved this overall and cannot wait for more upcoming installments.</font>
<font color=Brick red>
-What you just witnessed was the bite of the compy. Goodnight.</font>
<font color=Silver>The Timeline of the Gun is almost here! July 4</font>
At 1:02:08 PM on 6/29/2002, JPLuNaTiC said:
Amazing work! I agree with everything siad here
At 11:55:21 AM on 6/29/2002, AG5 [Critic] said:
<font color=Maroon>Excellent work! This Act was very interesting, especially with the background of the native people. Either you've really done your research or I'm extremely gullable :). This story is starting to come along and the pace is just right. I'm really looking forward to the next Act. Great job once again Vader.</font>
At 10:23:35 AM on 6/29/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
I agree with DD.
Awesome work Vader.
At 8:26:55 AM on 6/29/2002, Neo-the1 said:
I refuse to read this- change the color.
(Know that even if you don't will eventually copy and paste it onto something readable)
<i>~NeO~</i>
At 4:13:32 AM on 6/29/2002, Dino_Dude said:
Man, I'm totally into this story. Certainly one of better around right now. I only noticed 1 missing word that time, lol. Anyway, this story looks only to be getting started and what a start it is. Keep it up!
Cheers!
<i>Dino_Dude</i>
At 1:55:20 AM on 6/28/2002, Carna [Mod] said:
One of the more thought-out passages youll see on this site. Great stuff
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