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Hey Vader,good I can't wait to read more.
--Spinodude 11
At 1:10:24 AM on 6/13/2003, yvonne said:
Well, I was quite a bit older when I saw JP (23, to be exact), but I did have a 5 year old nephew that I brought to see that movie over 10 times, so I can remember how he acted. You've captured the spirit of young kids everywhere with this, Vader.
Very nice job so far. I'm looking forward to how Paul gets into the theater. He doesn't have a cool aunt to take him, eh? hehe.
:)
At 12:13:36 AM on 6/13/2003, JPJunkee said:
"It has to be! Just . . . just . . . just look at it!"
Hehehe, silly kids. . . .
That was quite entertaining, Vader. It wasn't very long, so I really don't have much to comment on. . . but I do want to read more, as it is posted.
Though, I must say, some of it seemed a little rushed. And, there seemed to be an over usage of commas in many places.
Still, you captured the essence of the young boy, quite flawlessly, and presented the world through his eyes with pristine clarity.
Looking forward to more.
-- JPJunkee
At 10:37:30 AM on 6/12/2003, Amber said:
holy shnikes!!!
Woops.. talk abot a funny screw up.. lmao.. oh my...
sorry. clearly the second word was supposed to be memories... in my last post... lol.. wow, that was great....
hehe.. mamories.. lol.. hehe
At 11:02:41 PM on 6/11/2003, Amber said:
ahhh. mamories... thanks for bringing back faded memories..... will read more soon...
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