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Thanx Ice...Alot!
At 9:42:45 PM on 12/31/2001, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skyblue>Hm...the story is good however I have a few complaints.
You switched tenses a lot, like from past to present without notice. Its not that big of a deal though and you could easily fix it! Overall I like this story! Good Job</font>
At 3:46:30 PM on 12/18/2001, TyrannoRex112 said:
Thanx!
At 8:07:36 PM on 12/17/2001, General Thade said:
I wanna find out what happens next cuz this was a good fic!
Nicecly done yranno112.
At 1:22:01 PM on 12/16/2001, AlanGrant5 said:
I think I might agree with Illiteration and Chaos on this one. I liked your X-Men one better. This one seems to be missing some details and some scenes don't really seem believable. I think you should stay committed to writing one story, that way you can poor all your hard work into one, and not leaving out some things in another. Anyway it's a fun read. :)
At 12:42:05 AM on 12/16/2001, raptorhunter22 said:
I liked it. But I pretty much agree with Chaos and Illiteration.
At 2:31:01 PM on 12/15/2001, TyrannoRex112 said:
See I didn't want 2 give away who the men were...I knew ppl wouldn't like me doing that...I promise the second chapter will be better!
At 2:11:04 PM on 12/15/2001, Illiteration said:
the first boat scene was kind of dumb...really boring with no detail....
At 2:10:56 PM on 12/15/2001, Chaos Edge X said:
Not very good. Action is overused, and the vocabulary is fairly limited.
Fun to read, though.
At 2:08:53 PM on 12/15/2001, TyrannoRex112 said:
ok
At 12:00:15 PM on 12/15/2001, TyrannoRex112 said:
Thanx!
At 11:33:10 AM on 12/15/2001, Mega T.Rex 13 said:
That was asaome!! I can't wait till the next chapter.
~Mega
At 10:04:35 AM on 12/15/2001, TyrannoRex112 said:
Thanx!
At 9:42:36 AM on 12/15/2001, Cyros said:
Thats a very good story, i will continue to read!
Aslong as they stay good as that!
--Cyros
"YOU KNOW IT MAKES SENSE"
http://dinoplanet.cjb.net
At 9:35:56 AM on 12/15/2001, TyrannoRex112 said:
Ok...Nobody is on yet...
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